Reviews for The Rivalry On The Island
Guest chapter 2 . 12/18/2016
Please finish this! it has good potential
Vikmaster14618 chapter 2 . 5/13/2015
I'm a Pokeshipping, Advance, Pearl, Ray, and Amourshipping fan and can't wait until the next chapter comes out. Thanks
Guest chapter 2 . 3/11/2015
Hurry up
Guest chapter 1 . 3/11/2015
Nice work love triangle anyone or love hexagon
K.T.S chapter 2 . 10/24/2014
Jak chapter 2 . 8/21/2013
Hey, nice fanfic. It's got a lot of shipping, exactly what I wanted. Just wright(spelled that wrong lol) more. Please... It's so good!
Ash: Yup! I'm a playa! *starts doing victory dance*
Me: Swag. *high five*
Misty, Dawn and May: *Starts throwing bricks at us*
Me: Anyway, keep writing.
Olivia-Ivy chapter 2 . 5/31/2013
I like it so far. If ur taking votes then I cast mine 4 brunetteshipping pearlshipping
SkyRage chapter 2 . 3/26/2013
so... any plans on updating soon?
Guest chapter 2 . 2/24/2013
UPDATE ! lol rand0m... But thts meh sooo idk but I love this story so plzzz update!
plattytehpwn chapter 2 . 1/8/2013
Wow. This is a great beginning for what looks to be a very well-written story. Now you just need to post more.
SarcasticSapphire chapter 2 . 3/11/2012
r u going to continue? O.o
Anime Fan 295647 chapter 2 . 10/6/2011
GOD chapter 2 . 6/29/2011
finish this, it's a good story, it just needs work
Australiaartie chapter 2 . 9/1/2010
Love it! Please write more!
Sarusuke chapter 2 . 7/19/2010
Hey! Even though there's only two chapters right now, I LOVE THIS FIC! I saw no grammar or spelling mistakes whatsoever, so kudos to you! Please, please, please continue this fic! I promise I'll review EVERY chapter! Oh, and I was wondering, maybe for the next chap, maybe Ash is going to see his Pokémon again with the girls, and you can make a little flirty bit between Gary and May (since they've never met before, and Ash gets SUPER jealous, causing Misty and Dawn to also get SUPER jealous! You don't have to, but it's just an idea Anyway, I'll stop making your story up and congratulate you again for having such an awesome story! Great job!
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