Reviews for Breaking Trinity |
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nix69 chapter 32 . 3/30/2013 love your story. I hope you return to it soon, can't wait for the next update! |
jeomedrado chapter 32 . 3/28/2013 sua fic e perfeita amando lĂȘ...beijus |
Nicole chapter 32 . 3/25/2013 Can you please just comment to let us know if an update is at all possible? This story is one of my favorites. |
Ann chapter 27 . 3/23/2013 I want you to know, firmly and vehemently, that I adore this story. I love the obsession. I love the adoration. I love the magnetic pull, the sexual desire, the intensity. I love this story. (not that crazy about Charlie being a little too "involved" though) But more to the point, I stumbled upon this and fell head-over-heels for your writing. It's amazing and addicting. I know you have hoards of messages asking you to update and professing their love for this...and although I hate to be one of the many who is reduced to begging...one must do what one must do. So, without further interruption: PLEASE, FOR THE LOVE OF GOD, WRITE MORE! PLEASE DO NOT LEAVE US LIKE THIS. PLEASE HAVE MERCY. FOR CHRISTS SAKE, PLEASE JUST LET US KNOW YOUR INTENTIONS! (And please know that this totally comes from a loving and heartfelt place, because i adore this story so much!) |
bebeginja chapter 32 . 3/11/2013 Sucked me in. Made my heart race. Need more! Hope you are healing and update soon! |
Daggers4U chapter 32 . 3/3/2013 Can't wait til they tell Charlie! |
CrookedArm chapter 32 . 3/1/2013 I am still absolutely thrilled I found this story, love the intelligence of the characters, the strong pull between them and will gladly wait for whenever it is that you can update it again and maybe get these kids some happiness! Very very enjoyable and engrossing read. |
CrookedArm chapter 12 . 2/27/2013 Wow. Things with Tanya are so deeply complicated for Edward. And for Bella to find out that now SHE is Victoria...what a crushing blow. I know it's not going to be possible for either of them to turn their backs on their connection though. Wish I would have found this story while it was being posted originally. Thrillingly done. |
CrookedArm chapter 10 . 2/27/2013 Incredible. Unparalleled in its intelligent, deeply connected characters. I am enraptured and immersed. |
CrookedArm chapter 9 . 2/27/2013 This chapter was worth it for the author's note character interview alone. But hot classroom sex? During class? Words fail me. Seriously, these characters are so brilliantly defined they are a true joy to read. |
CrookedArm chapter 6 . 2/26/2013 I don't know what else to say except incredible. At long last the intellect, vocabulary and heat I've longed for converging in these 6 chapters so far. Delightful to read. Edward's obsession with Bella is quickly building, and hers is starting to pervade. It's about to go down once school starts, little do they know. |
CrookedArm chapter 4 . 2/26/2013 This was so absolutely drenchingly, achingly scorching, I have chills. Can one add a story chapter to a favorites list? Jaysus. |
CrookedArm chapter 3 . 2/26/2013 This is absolutely incredible. Sensual, carnal, raw, completely immerses me in the moment with descriptions of scents so perfect, they are poetic. Physical reactions of lust that were almost disembodied in a way, oozing from Edward and Bella. Really wonderful description of the struggle to maintain logic as the reactions jolted and sparked. I am rapt. |
CrookedArm chapter 2 . 2/26/2013 Just found this story through another author's favorites, and it is FABULOUS! Intelligently-written, great introduction to Bella and where she's coming from. Vivid, descriptive and interesting. Looking forward to making my way through it. |
LostInStoryLand chapter 32 . 2/8/2013 This why I hste unfinished fics because you slways run. Risk people dont. Finish |