| Reviews for Breaking Trinity |
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   bookwormlove chapter 32 . 8/28/2012 can't wait for the next chapter! |
| LuvnmesumEdward chapter 32 . 8/28/2012 Love it! |
| RosaBella75 chapter 32 . 8/27/2012 Daaayumn! That was sooo hot! Had to laugh at the zipper! ;D *mwhahaha* One would almost think you'd nearly been caught with your pants down by a parent yer own self! teeee heee hee! *wink* Loved Alice and as always eager for more! Thanks! |
| Cherrysinger chapter 18 . 8/27/2012 I like how the connection between Edward and Bella is so intense, but at the same time, it's entirely unrealistic and a little bit too dramatic to be believable. Edward and Bella are only high school students and all of these events are taking place in a span of a few days. This story is not labelled as supernatural but clearly, the occurrences in this story are not natural. Furthermore, Bella and Edward know essentially nothing about each other and have hardly spoken at all. In fact, if I add together all the sentences they've spoken to each other thus far I'm not even sure that I would get a decent-sized paragraph. All of this just does not add up. I'm not sure how much more I can suspend my belief, but you do write awesome otherworldly lemons; when I read them I feel like Edward and Bella are doped up on drugs because their pleasure is so intense...so I might stick around just for those ;) |
| Jennifer chapter 32 . 8/27/2012 Great chapter as usual! Love it when Bella and Edward bump uglies (though I'm sure Edward's is very pretty, lol)! Can't wait for the next chapter; I'm SO glad you're continuing this story! |
| LindyP chapter 32 . 8/27/2012 I so long for your updates for this most awesome story! The intensity between them is perfect! Can't wait to read about tomorrow night! |
| hurricanelane chapter 32 . 8/27/2012 I am like a junkie for this story! I totally blew off work today to read all day! Love every last freaking syllable! |
| FluffyLiz chapter 32 . 8/27/2012 Man, you give good lemons! |
| shenaniwhatagans chapter 32 . 8/27/2012 Dare devils they are! Loved him taking her in her room...it wasn't up for debate. :) So he just doesn't realize that he loves her...when he does it's gonna knock him to his knees :) |
| shenaniwhatagans chapter 31 . 8/27/2012 So freaking good! Loved Edward coming clean on everything & her as well about Jacob stuff. Loved the hot loving on the porch & cant wait to see if he will catch them or not! Glad your back :) |
| shenaniwhatagans chapter 29 . 8/27/2012 Such a great chapter! Love Edwards parents :) |
| lms442 chapter 32 . 8/27/2012 Yay! You're back. So excited to continue reading this story! |
| shenaniwhatagans chapter 26 . 8/27/2012 Hats that it was done during a horrible time but it had to happen. Now Edward knows his family stands by him & he can get his snarling ass back to Bella! |
| shenaniwhatagans chapter 25 . 8/27/2012 Stupid Jake answering her phone. I think Laurant is with Tanya or at least likes her and is making a move. Go for it dude! Will Edward do something stupid after that phone call? Damn it |
| IluvOTH4ever chapter 32 . 8/27/2012 Passionate, well-written and a nice tender moment between Charlie and Bella. Great chapter :-) |