| Reviews for Breaking Trinity |
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   TLammy chapter 4 . 9/22/2009 Just found your story tonight, read straight thru (promise to go back and review the other chapters later). Damn this chapter was hot, one of the hottest I've ever read in FF. Well done, can't wait for more! |
| my2galspal chapter 4 . 9/22/2009 Whoa! That is just so primal (obviously). I'm not sure what to say yet other than I can't wait to read more. |
| kelseycjim chapter 4 . 9/22/2009 Wonderful chapter. |
| wizziewoo123 chapter 4 . 9/22/2009 is edward human? im not sure wether youv mentioned it? anyways great chapter! cant wait to read more! |
| my2galspal chapter 3 . 9/21/2009 Whoa! This chapter was totally different from the prologue and 1st chapter. Talk about some animal energy. I can't wait to learn more about your characters, especially Edward. I was very intrigued by his thought processes. Thanks for sharing your writing. I'm looking forward to reading more. |
| Ophelia1983 chapter 1 . 9/16/2009 Ok, cool, calm and nice beggining but I think you're gonna have us craving for more once again! |
| Mrs. Quincy chapter 3 . 9/16/2009 I'm intrigued post more soon |
| wizziewoo123 chapter 3 . 9/15/2009 definatley want to read more, hope you update soon! |
| TwilightJemS chapter 3 . 9/15/2009 Very interesting! Keep it coming :) |
| TwilightJemS chapter 2 . 9/15/2009 Great start! :) |
| VvDeadRosesvV chapter 1 . 9/15/2009 Thank you, kelsey for being the first one to send me a positive bit of joy! Christine, I am humbled! Jems, your awesome! behold Brits23! You are my own personal muse, a true genius, a goddess of word and inspiration! All hail the pure-blood of the Alpha-beta! /cookies for everyone! |
| TwilightJemS chapter 1 . 9/15/2009 What brand? O or B-? I happen to be O with a bit to spare :) |
| Brits23 chapter 3 . 9/15/2009 :D Congratulations, girl! You're gonna knock 'em dead with the next chapter...oh man...they won't even know what hit 'em! |
| christag banner chapter 3 . 9/15/2009 Looks like a great start to your new story. I can't wait to read more. Thanks for three chapters all in one day! WOW! |
| kelseycjim chapter 3 . 9/15/2009 This is really good |