Reviews for A Change of Heart
Guest chapter 5 . 7/20/2015
I think that it would be sweet if ash, brock, and dawn are about to leave to continue on thier adventure, but dawn says "ash,brock, i have a question","whats the next town you guys are gonna visit... Because... I want to meet you guys there, im going to stay here with paul for a few days, or at least until i know torterra is going to be ok" and then ash and brock agree to let dawn meet them in the next town they will be visiting. Then dawn runs up to paul, and hugs him from behind, and tells paul that she will be staying with him, but the room that nurse joy gives for there short stay them only has one small bed...
Shadow Rosealine chapter 1 . 6/30/2015
did anyone adopt this cuz i'll take it, might not fight it here but yeah i'll take it. So can i adopt it?
Guest chapter 1 . 5/14/2014
Great story concept. I like it when Paul and Torterra's relationship hits the light.
Guest chapter 5 . 4/17/2014
Up for adoption?! But, I love your story! :'( it is a shame but kind of you all the same.
Elizander chapter 1 . 4/16/2014
I've never read an Ikarishipping before. But this story has my attention.
SapphireLightHikari chapter 4 . 4/16/2014
PLEASE UPDATE IM REALLY STARTING TO LIKE THIS STORY! AND I REALLY HOPE YOU HAVENT GIVEN UP ON IT EVEN IF IT HAS BEEN 4 YEARS SINCE YOU LAST UPDATED XD XD XD
Sarah chapter 4 . 3/15/2014
I love how it's started. u should have team rocket come and do something to dawn but Paul can save her. p.s. her hugging him in this chapter would be super adorable
Sarah chapter 3 . 3/15/2014
U totally brought the soft side of Paul to life. I love this chapter
Crystal Winkle chapter 4 . 11/26/2013
Please review! It's getting awesome!
makayla chapter 4 . 8/26/2013
okay, so I'm not a fanfiction writer, but they need to do something so that an "accident" happends and they kiss or something. Like this, Dawn and Paul battle and an attack accidentally hits the other person and Dawn/Paul runs over to help, mushy scene, they kiss/ hug/ admit. Please write if you liked the idea I might be a fanfiction writer!
Guest chapter 4 . 12/21/2012
for chapter 4 ideas, have paul smile a bit more(obviously XD) and maybe while dawn and him are working on his training, have nurse joy find them and update on torterras condition
Guest chapter 2 . 12/21/2012
omg i cried during chapter 2
Tanya chapter 4 . 12/4/2012
Alright, u could say how Much Paul got nice and used his Pokemon in battle and for nicer and nicer
hailstorm888 chapter 4 . 10/18/2012
awesome! love it please update soon but sorry i got nothing for ideas
Guest chapter 4 . 9/25/2012
well,you could oh,idk,INCRESE(?) FLUFFINESS :D No,seriuosly(?) lets have one gigantic marshmallow fluff ball next chapter. PLEASE UPDATE SOON! k bye!
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