Reviews for A Change of Heart
Guest chapter 1 . 5/14/2014
Great story concept. I like it when Paul and Torterra's relationship hits the light.
Guest chapter 5 . 4/17/2014
Up for adoption?! But, I love your story! :'( it is a shame but kind of you all the same.
Elizander chapter 1 . 4/16/2014
I've never read an Ikarishipping before. But this story has my attention.
RogueCupcake chapter 4 . 4/16/2014
PLEASE UPDATE IM REALLY STARTING TO LIKE THIS STORY! AND I REALLY HOPE YOU HAVENT GIVEN UP ON IT EVEN IF IT HAS BEEN 4 YEARS SINCE YOU LAST UPDATED XD XD XD
Sarah chapter 4 . 3/15/2014
I love how it's started. u should have team rocket come and do something to dawn but Paul can save her. p.s. her hugging him in this chapter would be super adorable
Sarah chapter 3 . 3/15/2014
U totally brought the soft side of Paul to life. I love this chapter
Crystal Winkle chapter 4 . 11/26/2013
Please review! It's getting awesome!
makayla chapter 4 . 8/26/2013
okay, so I'm not a fanfiction writer, but they need to do something so that an "accident" happends and they kiss or something. Like this, Dawn and Paul battle and an attack accidentally hits the other person and Dawn/Paul runs over to help, mushy scene, they kiss/ hug/ admit. Please write if you liked the idea I might be a fanfiction writer!
Guest chapter 4 . 12/21/2012
for chapter 4 ideas, have paul smile a bit more(obviously XD) and maybe while dawn and him are working on his training, have nurse joy find them and update on torterras condition
Guest chapter 2 . 12/21/2012
omg i cried during chapter 2
Tanya chapter 4 . 12/4/2012
Alright, u could say how Much Paul got nice and used his Pokemon in battle and for nicer and nicer
hailstorm888 chapter 4 . 10/18/2012
awesome! love it please update soon but sorry i got nothing for ideas
Guest chapter 4 . 9/25/2012
well,you could oh,idk,INCRESE(?) FLUFFINESS :D No,seriuosly(?) lets have one gigantic marshmallow fluff ball next chapter. PLEASE UPDATE SOON! k bye!
ikarishipper chapter 4 . 9/23/2012
im sorry i posted random ones but i... wait... are u in for ikarishipping!? plz say yes anyway u should nnot let torterra die and make dawn love paul and have pul have the same fellings for her and they should hold hands and ash would freak out like this HEWKHYBFYRKSDBVYTRKDBVJHRKBW YJBRYJHSBKJRD OH SHIZ. lol im sorry im a weird person than brock saiys whats goi- BUTSKNRUVNSRUSUBUKS SO JELUS!1 when they kiss
ikarishipper chapter 3 . 9/23/2012
i like mean paul but ... i like nice paul when hes his girlyfriend :) :) :) :) :) olala.
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