Reviews for Misery Business
finalflash1992 chapter 6 . 6/6/2010
AH! lemon cliffhanger, NOT COOL! lol, well wow. i am really curious how the storys gonna go from here,oh, and have i still the record of first reviewer? you ever notice how much actual reviewing i do in my reviews. . .? sorry bout that
jane chapter 6 . 6/6/2010
damn theres no point in keeping the M rating if theres no lemon so could you at least ask smeone to write it for, and make sure tifas a virgin. if thers no lemon change the damn rating to PG 13 DAMN IT
Chaotic Symphony chapter 6 . 6/5/2010
Each chapter has been a great read. I have enjoyed the unfolding of their love it seems realistic and beautiful in the same instance. I am glad to have been able to read a wonderfully drafted story and hope to possibly have an epilogue in a few weeks or something similar to a close in coming chapters. Again great story!
Serina Tsuki chapter 6 . 6/5/2010
Yay! Can't wait for the next chapter!
cloudlover2989 chapter 6 . 6/5/2010
ouch can i say stabed in the heart lol next chap plz
cloudlover2989 chapter 5 . 6/3/2010
ok wow that was bad but wow i feel bad for Xander when/if cloud finds out cuz damn damn damn i just can't wait for you
hannabethh chapter 5 . 6/2/2010
this was like a mega cliffhanger i love itt:O
Stryper chapter 5 . 5/28/2010
LOVE your story so far!

By the way, Paramore rocks! clever idea. lol

Anyway, awesome chapter, I cant wait to read the next one!

Update Soon!
finally a chapt chapter 5 . 5/28/2010
i love it. Please tell me that tifa DID NOT sleep with him. and she better be a virgin cuz she is! because ill stop reading it right now.
ohsnapples chapter 5 . 5/28/2010
something bads going to happen now... like cloud finds someone else. update soon!
WellingtonBoot chapter 5 . 5/28/2010
I also love Decoy by Paramore!


I see what you mean about this being rushed, thought at the same time I'm glad you didn't attempt to pace it out by filling it with woffle, a mistake quite a few people make which turns a reasonably good chapter spoilt.

To be fair, I wasn't sure how I was expecting Xander to behave when she told him she couldn't marry him. He seemed pretty angry which is fair considering his pride has been stomped, though at the same time he seemed to care quite a bit for someone who only wanted her for sex, unless I misunderstood his intentions slightly.

A little more length would have been nice too though I understand if you kept it short for creative reasons.
finalflash1992 chapter 5 . 5/27/2010
did i make it to the first 5 reviews? is my record intact? wow, this chapter . . its interesting lol, i'm pretty much committed to your stories at this point lol, call it an addiction, idc xD, thanks for uploading, dear
CoffeeAndBaileys chapter 5 . 5/27/2010
Very well written, I'm definately looking forward to more! Update soon!
ohsnapples chapter 4 . 5/20/2010
gahhh! update soon! i mean really soon!
finalflash1992 chapter 4 . 5/20/2010
woo! welcome back, my lovely! how've you been? and i missed the story, well written as always! hopefully i won't have to wait 6 months on the next chapter, though lol alls forgiven :P
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