I think my jaw just hit the ground. No? NO?

:(

Now I really have all of the feelings. And I don't like them.

Double :(

Oh, dear. Oh, my. That is exactly what happens. EXACTLY. It's so not romantic... Alien, imho, was the exact perfect word for the exactly perfectly worded description of what just went down.

And everything is different now.

Sigh.

Life has this funny way of getting in the way of the best-laid plans, doesn't it?

I thought that spending time together was sort of forbidden, but I really loved that Bella & Edward had a few extra moments together before Sunday's appointment.

And Jake... may complicate things. Maybe. Surely. He usually does. ;)

I love how your Bella is approaching everything. She's kind of a lunatic. And I totally understand why. If I had made this sort of ~ arrangement ~ I'd be going about this the exact same way she is.

But... I have the feeling that a few surprises are in store for your little planner. ;)

Oh, I'm having all of the feelings. I think I snorted a little bit when Alice let out a war cry. And the whole - throwing herself into things & getting carried away with it - thing... Yeah, I understand that. There are so many things happening right now in this story! ;)

That whole chapter had me thinking about the movie "Juno," the receptionist, boysenberry condoms, and her boyfriend's "pie junk." LOL

I'm pretty sure that I was right before - this is definitely brilliant. It is just fun to read - plain and simple as that. ;)

This is brilliant. I'm always fashionably late to the game. But I always show up. Seriously, this is good stuff so far. ;)

Mwahaha!

Priceless. Love it.

omg! lol

Wow! That was awkward sex at its poorest! They are gonna have to work extra hard to make it to Edward and Bella standards. That was painful to read. Not because you did a bad writing job or anything but man they were clueless. I think the only thing they knew was wear a condom and stick it in. Talk about no finese. Plus no happy ending for our girl. She's got to be asking herself about now...Whats the big deal?

gah! you tease me with those lines in the epilogue! you are evil!

anyways, this story was really funny and pretty different, especially since it's all human. there were some parts that i just had to scroll through because it got a little boring, but this story did hold my attention. i read the first 12 chapters last night then the rest today, and i was excited to get home from school and finish it. lol i love bella in this story, how erratic she is. though i was kinda peeved/curious about why she hated her mother so much, since you said she abandoned her, died and that line about being sober so why the hell did she hate her?

btw, i thought you were taking your profile down? and i'm sorry about your house, with the fire and all...

Poor, clueless Bella!

And I wonder what's going on with Edward/Emmett? Glad this is complete!

Great job so far. Loving this story!

I like this Bella. She so unusual, at least from all the other Bella's I've read in fanfic. "Typical" Bella would be backing down at the rejection that seemed to be coming from Edward at the end. But not this Bella! A deal is a deal!

On to read more!

OMG! This looks nuts! In a good way. Looking forward to reading Edward's reaction.