Reviews for How My Life was Ruined in 14 Days
alicecullenlvr chapter 3 . 8/31/2011
I agree on the iPhone thing. Bella making Edward get tested would've been funny enough in and of itself, but to have her take him to the place where his father works? Would have been mortifying in real life, but as this is fictional I can safely say it was pretty funny! I would love to be a fly on the wall between Carlisle and Edward later.
alicecullenlvr chapter 2 . 8/31/2011
Okay, I like this Bella. Hehe, this is funny. Sex For Dummies...wow. I really think I am going to like this one.
RunsfromReality chapter 3 . 8/30/2011
I think I died a little bit out of mortification, too. I got there a lot faster than Bella...eep!
RunsfromReality chapter 2 . 8/30/2011
Although I was pretty darn amused the whole chapter, this one really made me laugh out loud:

"Without making eye contact with anyone.

Ever again in my entire life."

Yep, nothing like buying sex stuff in front of strangers, Bella!
RunsfromReality chapter 1 . 8/30/2011
I did very much enjoy this first chapter, and I'm looking forward to reading more.

I had a plan once too. It was very detailed. Now I have a balding man who smokes too much. And yet ... it works out somehow. Hopefully Bella's new plan will work for her, too, although I honestly have no idea how I would respond if somebody asked me point-blank in a cafeteria for a sex date.
ssarrahh chapter 14 . 8/30/2011
Awww they're so cute together. Bella was well...different but I kinda ended up loving here. I'm glad she was finally able to compromise.

kudos!
alicecullenlvr chapter 1 . 8/30/2011
Haha, that was funny. I think I like this so far. Are we going to be able to get any Edward POV's? I always like to get his perspective, and I can only imagine, a lot, what he must be thinking right now.
JGroIsMyEdward chapter 1 . 8/19/2011
LOL. I kinda love how Bella's mind works...LOVE!
Genevieveforfun chapter 14 . 8/18/2011
Ah, I want to go on a world trip with enough cash and a sweet guy like Edward...
Genevieveforfun chapter 13 . 8/18/2011
Hi just found this story and got caught up on it. It is very cute and funny. I normally skip highschool stories, but this one was worht reading. Thanks :)
Twink423 chapter 14 . 8/17/2011
Wow! Bella sure is stepping out of her comfort zone with this big trip. Glad Edward is letting her plan a few things at least. Such a cute story! :-D
Twink423 chapter 13 . 8/17/2011
Yay! Finally getting their sweet kisses on!

Glad Edward is patient with her. He's exactly what she needs. And he replaced Bob with Fred. What a great guy!
Twink423 chapter 12 . 8/16/2011
Oh no! How will Bella deal with no Bob?

And Edward pretty much pouring out his heart to her and she's so oblivious to it all. How can he spell it out more for me to understand?
Twink423 chapter 11 . 8/16/2011
Loved the tickle attack!

And now Bella is loosening up a bit more and not having everything so planned out. Edward is good for. Glad Charlie approves too!
youngandmature chapter 14 . 8/16/2011
I really liked this chapter :)

"That isn't what I meant, well, maybe it was. At the time–but not anymore. I do want you to be a part of my life." Didn't B want him a part of her life a couple days ago? What changed?

And could you please explain the chapter title to me: How My Life was (semi) Happily Ruined. The semi kind of confuses me.

Thanks. Great story.
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