This sounds awesome. I wonder what his reaction will be? Yes, or no? Or (if no), will he let her ask some one else... interesting. :D

I really enjoyed this story! :)

awesome story, thanks

these lines made me laugh...yeah, out loud!

"Hello, Mr. Swan."

"Edward."

I enjoyed reading this story immensely. It's quite beautifully written, and Bella's POV is both mortifying and fantastically hilarious. Edward's patience and diffidence are so heart-warming.

It's been a pleasure, in short. Tyvm x

Ill tell you something you already know when I say how much Ive enjoyed this story! It had it all, the fun, the romance, the tears, simply beautifully perfect! Thank you.

OMG she did not just ask that

Um, Amazing! So you see this morning I showed up at school late, barely having time to catch a conversation. My best friend gushed to me about this story and how it was too funny and how Bella reminded her of me and that I just HAD to read it. So we switched phones and I read during my classes,at lunch then when I got home and now here I am reviewing after just having finished. This story is so hilarious, and incredible. I'm exactly like Bella it's pretty creepy. Most of her thoughts have been in my head at one point or another. I serious;y felt as if you were writing through my eyes. I'm bella's exact clone minus the super-planning, sex proposition, sweet Edward, and loss of V-card. Oh! and Bob will be missed(P.S. I name my phone too. Alex :) )I truly loved this story. So thank you so much for writing it. It was the best. (:

Can't wait to hear her thoughts on the book she bought. Bob hehe cute

*smiling ear to ear* and *rubbing hands together*. great start. completed too :)

HOLAY SHEET. just wow. you wouldn't know this, but i've been SADLY out of the twific world for months. i'm starting to make a comeback, because i reaally really miss it. for some, twilight is just the last big thing that is now OLD. not for me. i've just been busy with life. twilight kinnda takes you out of it for a while.. BUT MY POINT IS. although i have read snippets here and there, i have NOT reviewed anything in forever. but this chapter. this line "How you can miss the things that were bad for you. " makes me realize just how amazing these fics can be. you read one line, and you feel emotions too strong for one sudden moment, and its like the whole world is either crashing down on you, or rising up, and you know you've found something great.

you've written bella amazingly. but i was wondering how this story was going to go, how it was going to work. let me tell, IT WORKS. wow. just wow. i'm killing myself not reading more immediately NOW. but i just had to tell you how great its been so far. bella's a girl with a past, but you've gotten us all to forget that with her outrageous, meticulous planning and adventures.. she takes "responsible" to a whole new level.. but i totally forgot about her mother.. UNTIL THAT MOMENT WHOLY FUCKBUDDY MUFFIN.

okay. i cant stand it any longer, I MUST READ MORE.

BOB!

Oh hell. Now I'm sad for them. He's so sweet and she's so lost... and what can I say about Alice? Ouch.

Just wow! I know this is complete so I'm probably a little late with my review, but if you're still checking out reviews... I'm loving such a calm and understanding Edward, and an almost aspergic Bella, although I'm guessing that she's not and just uses routine as a coping strategy.

I'm glad I get to read this straight through - hoping for an EPOV at some point to get a clue how others view Bella.

Oh wow lol, I am so embarassed for Bella right now...

me loved the ending thank you for not pulling before i finished reading thank you for sharing this one with us ! :D