Reviews for How My Life was Ruined in 14 Days |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Your Bella reminds me of Temperance Brennan from "Bones". Cute story, it was recc'ed in the-gazebo a few days ago and I'm enjoying it thus far. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story. Bella's voice his hilariously uptight. She reminds me of Elle from Legally Blonde, for some reason. Thanks for sharing your wonderful talent. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is awesome! I can't wait to read where it goes! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh dear Lord. Your Bella is Tracey Flick times one thousand! LOL It really made me laugh at her internal dialogue about whether you can tell by looking at someone. My virginal college roommate in a somewhat drunken conversation pondered the same thing - not realizing that I had already turned in my V-card... I can't wait to see how her life gets "ruined" over the next two weeks! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This seems like it could be really fun and cute! This is going on my alerts! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like this version of Bella. I like how simply she sees everything - things are either in accordance with her plan or not (or irrelevant to the plan, I guess). There's a lot of interesting issues that you've introduced in these first two chapters (and not just with Bella and Edward) and I'm looking forward to seeing how you explore them in your amusing, but subtly insightful, style. Yeah, that's it - I like it :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I read this and was laughing to myself the entire time. I wonder if we will get to hear Edward's POV. I can only imagine what he is thinking. Either way, this is a totally new and funny Bella. I like her. |
![]() ![]() ![]() super cute, so far. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh gosh - that ending, so funny! Good sense of comedic timing and characterization, btw. Looking forward to reading more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ha! The ladies rec'd this on TYLDF recently (I know that if Pastiche says it's funny, it is) and since I'm a sucker for the humor/romance stories so I had to come on over. This is fabulous! Can't wait to read more. :-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Omg, she totally just went out and said it. I laughed so hard. Love it so far! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wey! I love me some organisation. |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOL this is one of the funniest stories I've read in a while! Add one of the few wonderful Bellas. Awesome premise, I'm looking forward to the coming chapters! Thanks Deepika |
![]() ![]() ![]() Too funny. Glad to take up the 'biased' rec since you crazy TLYDF-ers rarely let me down. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved the first two chapters. This looks like it's going to be A LOT of fun! |