Reviews for How My Life was Ruined in 14 Days |
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![]() ![]() ![]() bb i am TRULY loving this story. really. its all awkward and nervewracking and bella is such a idk all organized and making me laugh and alice is fabulous and edward is cute already and thanks for making this so awesome. angel |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved it. Slowly but surely, we see Bella's plans all changing. Hopefully for the better. I can't imagine being that rigid, that planned out. Edward's stipulation was perfect. |
![]() ![]() ![]() At least he said yes. Great chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is funny and well written, looking forward to the next chapter, hope it's soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() my favorite were the last two lines. I think this is a good start. I hope to see more development of bella's character. she's funny and prudish enough! i hope there's more to her too. I'll add it to my story alert. |
![]() ![]() ![]() BWAH HAHAHA I'm dying here. Too stinking funny. I can't believe she actually had the balls to walk up to him and ask him that though. Sheesh. Can't wait to see where you take this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() that's mean...no more follow-up? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm defiantly looking forward to more! This is my kind of Bella all OCD w/ a BlackBerry (you know how I love mine). 3 you, 3 your writing. (you're pretty kick-ass you know) :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think you're my new favorite person. For serious. This will be great! |
![]() ![]() ![]() omg classic I love how Bella has no idea how OCD she is, or how weird it is to proposition someone like that. Brilliant. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a cute story, are you going to add more chapters, I hope? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow...hopefully sex with Edward will get that corncob out of her butt. Great story so far. |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOL I think this has the great potential to go either way... really funny or really angsty ... or maybe both? I'm really looking forward for more. Love the descriptions, Bella's train of thought... she clearly knows what's best for her... picking Edward couldn't have been that hard, now could it? She think a lot, but I think her internal voice has been quieted down... no instincts, no feelings, no desires... Wonder what roles Emmett and Jasper will have next ;) I really loved the premise :D Very original! Can't wait for more! Thanx :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() hysterical!...cannot wait for more...still uncertain exactly how her life was ruined but soo looking forward to finding out! |
![]() ![]() Haha! This is hilarious. Its funny how casually she asks him. Cant wait for next chapter, ill be waiting. ] |