Reviews for How My Life was Ruined in 14 Days
Ms. Leading08 chapter 1 . 9/17/2009
This seems like it could be a lot of fun. Usually, Edward is always the skittish, OCD one; so I like the idea of Bella being like that. Plus her inner dialogue is just hilarious.

Hmm...I wonder what he'll say...? ;)
ssssssssssssssss chapter 1 . 9/17/2009
Bahahah Bella is so awkwardly cute. And that ending! Well I have to say I

laughed my ass off ;)
ssn112358 chapter 1 . 9/17/2009
Funny, brilliant, original. Will be waiting for update.

Super quote:

Bella - I could just...stare at the ceiling until it was where it was supposed to be.
maizeandblue chapter 1 . 9/17/2009
Very entertaining so far. OCD Bella's internal monologue is quite amusing...

I'm anxious for Edward's reaction!
hello12345678810 chapter 1 . 9/17/2009
haha i like this ocd bella. Having everything planned and freaking out cause she doesnt have a plan to have sex. The way she asked edward haha. I cant wai to hear edwards response or how the rest of the story will go. This is very different and originall and i really like it thus far.
biekecullen chapter 1 . 9/17/2009
Good story, hope there's more to come soon ;)
RACHIAN chapter 1 . 9/17/2009
So intriguing!
ecxe chapter 1 . 9/17/2009
"I was just looking through my schedule and saw that I had Sunday evening free, around seven o'clock?" bwahahaha! dear, sweet, virginal bella. this is going to be a great story!
Demosthenes91 chapter 1 . 9/17/2009
Came over on a rec from Pastiche Pen. So, Bella crazy much? :) I'm dying to hear not only Edward's reaction, but the entireity of her 'pitch.' at least we know she actually 'likes' him, and didn't choose him at random.

Looking forward to the rest.

;)
mallmouse chapter 1 . 9/17/2009
lol, this was so funny (in a good way ;). PastichePen recommended it and I just added it to my alerts. I'm looking forward to the next chapter (if Edward hasn't had a heart attack that is)
Captivated chapter 1 . 9/17/2009
Promising, promising... Enjoyed the first chapter.

You're on my *read* list!

:)
polyphany chapter 1 . 9/17/2009
Oh, this looks like it's going to be so GOOD! Hysterical premise! I can't wait to see what happens next!
jedigirlsc chapter 1 . 9/17/2009
Ah hahahahaha

Don't beat around the bush, get straight to the point. Looking forward to the next chapter to see how this goes!
JeNnNn chapter 1 . 9/17/2009
for some reason, this story makes me wanna plan out my life.

lol

'bob the blackberry'

my friend named hers brian. its funny coz im ACTUALLY being serious. lol

ek...probably wasnt a good idea to be reading this while someone has a curling iron in your hair. which i did and after reading that last line i laughed out loud n scared the hair stylist and she burnt herself.

:/

its okay, she's fine, nothing major but im pretty sure she doesnt like me now. which is okay coz i dont really like her either...

ANYWAY, sorry rant over.

great chapter. loved the story idea :D

-jenn
kim67255 chapter 1 . 9/16/2009
Interesting so far. Lets see where you take this.
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