Reviews for How My Life was Ruined in 14 Days
Pastiche Pen chapter 1 . 9/16/2009
as i said before, you're funny and brillz. go you!

hehehe
Tiggrmommi chapter 1 . 9/16/2009
ROTFLMFAO! Can't wait to see his continued reaction!
ShouldHaveStuckToReading chapter 1 . 9/16/2009
Loved it! Bella is very cute, in a anal find of way. Love the plan, and how she tweaks it. And the Jasper/Emmett banter was great. And you ended it perfectly, leaving me asking for more!

So glad you caved!
TheHatDoesNothing chapter 1 . 9/16/2009
YES! HERO!

I love this Bella more then Twilight-Bella.

She is freaking awesome & Bob is awesome!

I love how she just says it - will you have sex with me?

xD GREAT STUFF!

This is supper wonderful

You could probabkly change the names of the places & names

and have yourself a full on story :P Not just fanfic.

I cant wait for more.

And yes i do realize that this is only chapter one

but this story is great already.

Keep up the amazing writing,

Peace, love & Maple Syrup,

Shannon
nanymilan chapter 1 . 9/16/2009
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

OMG!

I cant believe how she asked Edward to have sex!

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

It would be really good if you could make an EPOV about that!

HAHAAHAHAHA!

;)
jimemon chapter 1 . 9/16/2009
Buah, I love Bella and her organized ass, one can't say the girl is nothing but goal oriented isn't she? Loved it!
applesandcaptainswan chapter 1 . 9/16/2009
Oh no! How absolutely awkward for Edward there. I would love to hear what he was thinking at that moment right there.

I love the sound of this story already and I can't wait to read more! Please please update soon!
colacherry chapter 1 . 9/16/2009
ha! love it so far!
GinnyW 31 chapter 1 . 9/16/2009
I like it.

I want more.

I want to know what happens after chapter 2.

I'm greedy, what can I say? :D
Cardoor365 chapter 1 . 9/16/2009
AHA!

Those last few lines were funny!

I wonder what his full reaction will be!

Pleasee update soon! This story is great!
Mdots chapter 1 . 9/16/2009
LMAO!

ROFL!

THAT was simply AMAZING! I was laughing like an idiot and my mother thought I have gone insane! That was brilliant. Great. Wonderful chapter and a good story start. I loved how you created humor without doing anything... crazy.. or that it looks like you are desperately creating humor. the situation and Bella's thinking is enough for me to laugh hysterically. I wonder what Edward thought during the last scene.

I also wonder what those two think about each other.

Fabulous.

Waiting for next update eagerly. I don't usually bother with authors by making their life miserable till the next update, but this is so good...I would happily do so in order to get the next chapter ;-)

UPDATE SON :D
limona chapter 1 . 9/16/2009
Loved it. But you knew that. :)
YankeeDiva chapter 1 . 9/16/2009
Haahahaha great opening!
cruel-tobe-kind chapter 1 . 9/16/2009
lol. i always compare my life to the 40-year-old virgin. i sympathize with bella.
Kyrene once Blood Roses chapter 1 . 9/16/2009
Oh my god, I love it! Bella is a nut. Is Edward going to be all romantic and has been saving himself for his soulmate or some crap like that? Because that would be really funny...Although the end to this was epic and funny enough. I have a visual of his face that I'm cracking up to. Alrighty, Keep Going!
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