Reviews for How My Life was Ruined in 14 Days |
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![]() ![]() ![]() as i said before, you're funny and brillz. go you! hehehe |
![]() ![]() ![]() ROTFLMFAO! Can't wait to see his continued reaction! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved it! Bella is very cute, in a anal find of way. Love the plan, and how she tweaks it. And the Jasper/Emmett banter was great. And you ended it perfectly, leaving me asking for more! So glad you caved! |
![]() ![]() ![]() YES! HERO! I love this Bella more then Twilight-Bella. She is freaking awesome & Bob is awesome! I love how she just says it - will you have sex with me? xD GREAT STUFF! This is supper wonderful You could probabkly change the names of the places & names and have yourself a full on story :P Not just fanfic. I cant wait for more. And yes i do realize that this is only chapter one but this story is great already. Keep up the amazing writing, Peace, love & Maple Syrup, Shannon |
![]() ![]() ![]() HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! OMG! I cant believe how she asked Edward to have sex! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! It would be really good if you could make an EPOV about that! HAHAAHAHAHA! ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Buah, I love Bella and her organized ass, one can't say the girl is nothing but goal oriented isn't she? Loved it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh no! How absolutely awkward for Edward there. I would love to hear what he was thinking at that moment right there. I love the sound of this story already and I can't wait to read more! Please please update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() ha! love it so far! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like it. I want more. I want to know what happens after chapter 2. I'm greedy, what can I say? :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() AHA! Those last few lines were funny! I wonder what his full reaction will be! Pleasee update soon! This story is great! |
![]() ![]() ![]() LMAO! ROFL! THAT was simply AMAZING! I was laughing like an idiot and my mother thought I have gone insane! That was brilliant. Great. Wonderful chapter and a good story start. I loved how you created humor without doing anything... crazy.. or that it looks like you are desperately creating humor. the situation and Bella's thinking is enough for me to laugh hysterically. I wonder what Edward thought during the last scene. I also wonder what those two think about each other. Fabulous. Waiting for next update eagerly. I don't usually bother with authors by making their life miserable till the next update, but this is so good...I would happily do so in order to get the next chapter ;-) UPDATE SON :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved it. But you knew that. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Haahahaha great opening! |
![]() ![]() ![]() lol. i always compare my life to the 40-year-old virgin. i sympathize with bella. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my god, I love it! Bella is a nut. Is Edward going to be all romantic and has been saving himself for his soulmate or some crap like that? Because that would be really funny...Although the end to this was epic and funny enough. I have a visual of his face that I'm cracking up to. Alrighty, Keep Going! |