I just have to tell you I'm grinning like a loon and have just said to myself: "Best story ever!"

I am re-reading your story for the umpteenth time; it always makes me laugh. And cringe. I just love it, every single word.

I have laughed so hard while reading this hilarious story. Even right now while typing this I'm laughing at one or the other thing which happened in this story. Bella is absolutely adorable and shall I say brave? I mean who has the guts to propose a boy all of a sudden in the middle of a cafeteria to fornicate with you *laughs*. Edward was as always charming and cute but it was Bella of this fic who captured my heart. I loved her. Sometimes I could relate to her so much and sometimes I couldn't. But that's the thing which makes this even more special.
My favourite chapter has to be the one where they buy condoms. I almost fell out of my seat because I was laughing so hard. Though this was not the only chapter which made me laugh this hard.
I would like to make a special mention of Jake and Jasper. Those two did not have much to do in this fic but still they left their mark on it. Charlie is a very cool Dad, I mean what type of father gives his blessings to his daughter to fornicate*laughs again*. I should not have been reading this story because its my exam tomorrow. Yet I'm reading this which should be enough proof to explain how much I loved it.
I know I have written a very long review and you won't even read it but I just wanted to express myself and I'm glad that I discovered this fanfic. I wish I could read more of your stories. Thank you for sharing this wonderful story with us.

Edward had picked up Bella on their date from her house. He even met Charlie on that day so it would be wrong to say that he came to her house the first time today.

Bella better cancel that appointment...i don't wanna see a mortified Edward!

funny! i loved it

Thank you so much for writing this lovely Fic. I really enjoyed the wonderful escape. I know you felt pressure trying to get it done, but you did it!

As you and Bella both know, you just can't plan for everything and that's ok!️

Wow that was kinda anti climatic. Bella didn't seem to get into it. They didn't even kiss. I wish she would relax and try harder to enjoy it. I thought she was going to turn into a sex kitten, but she is to regimated. She was always looking at his lips, but didn't kiss him. Poor Bella, what is her mothers story. She needs help. Help her Edward, please.

Why is Edward backing out now that Bella is getting very interested in his lips!

Alice is nuts!

Is Edward embarrassed about his friends in the restaurant?

This Fic is the best, I can't stop smiling. I've been reading it to my husband and he's been laughing too.

Bob needs a girlfriend. How 'bout a nice slim sexy iPhone?

I just love how Edward made her go on the dare. I have the feeling that he's trying to loosen her up. She's so regimated! Maybe a good orgasm will change her whole life hehe!

Hey, thanks for sharing I loved this! However I dont really understand why you're removing your stories..why not simply change your bio ansd jump ship? That way many people can enjoy your stories. But either way, thank you for posting!

I assume they'll be staying in backpacker hostels. imagine them having sex in like a 6 bed dorm room. oh my. oh they'll be adventurous and do it outdoors. Europeans are more open about things. They don't censor much on tv either.

She's so much more bearable now. and I'm amazed how so many Americans don't even have passports.

RIP Bob. Rest in Pieces.

She's just like Liz Parker. Smug little shit thought she'd be Head Molecular Biologist before she even graduated high school.