Reviews for How My Life was Ruined in 14 Days |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Google Translate. French. Départ canon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOVED IT :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() the start of the chapter was really good and it hooked me in and i like the way you ended this chapter, its funny but awkard in edward's part...love this story so far |
![]() ![]() ah ah ah! i am laughing soo hard! Your characters are soo funny. Keep on keepng it light. This is great. |
![]() ![]() This story is really funny! and fun to read! Thank you. bella is hilarious! |
![]() ![]() ![]() "Thank you... Come again?" I am for real dying here! I love this. Great, awkward Bella. And I have this feeling that E has been in love with her before the deal *swoon* |
![]() ![]() ![]() 'Thank you come again,' she is a riot. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, Edward must really like her. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, a fire! Glad nobody was hurt and that it was only small damage. This is a year and a half later, but wanted to say that much at least. Scary. Story was wonderful! Really enjoyed the whole thing. Thank you so much for it :) Christy |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh no! Bob is dead! Why am I so thrilled about that? I like to plan myself, but hers are to the extreme. It all stems from her not wanting to be like Renee, so much so, that she is the opposite in the extreme. I hope she gets this in the next couple of days . . . |
![]() ![]() ![]() Did you ever do the EPOV for the auction? Is it hiding somewhere I may have access to? I would love to see his reaction to her walking up to him in the cafeteria that day . . . the things that must have gone through his head would be something to read for sure! I get the very distinct feeling that Edward was liking her before any of this happened, but the boys just figured she was unapproachable. I love Edward with Charlie as well. I like how Charlie knows Bella so well that he knows what is going on but turning a blind eye to it, sort of. Very odd first time I must say, but very fitting for this Bella. I just wish Edward would speak up and stop holding back. This is just so much fun! Christy |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was flying through the chapters and realized I had not reviewed in my rush to get to the next chapter. So that said, I thought I would. This story is so fun and I am loving it! Thank you so much for it . . . yay! Christy |
![]() ![]() ![]() Such an intriguing plot. They both have their quirks. This chapter was a tear jerker for me... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lmao! Seriously. Brilliant. |
![]() ![]() ![]() His awkward third leg is now my favorite term for dick. Seriously awesome line! For all that Edward kept trying to be a gentleman, he didn't give her an orgasm. And then he fell asleep. Hmmm |