Reviews for Soothing a Chocobo's Ruffled Feathers
Renata21 chapter 1 . 2/20/2013
wow if I was cloud I would have offed myself from the sheer embarrassment.
spiel chapter 1 . 7/14/2012
I think if you re-formatted this fic you'd get a few more review/readers, as is the low number of paragraphs is quite frigthening and makes it harder to read.
LuffyMarra chapter 1 . 7/16/2010
Not a bad start. Will you be adding a chapter soon? I'd like to see what Zack and Seph's plan was.
RecklessWonder chapter 1 . 9/20/2009
Oh dear.

I'm sure this would be an impressive story for a first time writer but you really need to sort out the paragraphs. It's too hard to read otherwise and really distracts the reader from the potential.