Reviews for Save me
BabyGhost123 chapter 22 . 2/1
I hope u update soon I like how the story is going...
Loveless150050 chapter 7 . 12/7/2014
Like, wish chapters were longer
littlepanther chapter 1 . 10/17/2014
MORE! :)
Guest chapter 22 . 9/26/2014
Guest chapter 19 . 9/25/2014
Isn't Harry 19? That's what the teacher form he filled out said and if he just turned that means he just became gay so that doesn't make sense. By the way you're using the wrong "your". You're writing "your" as in "your song" when you mean "you're" as in the combination of you and are used in "you're a great author" :)
Guest chapter 14 . 9/25/2014
You sort of repeated the last line twice in different places in this chapter (loose drawstrings part). You also have a lot of unnecessary capital letters that are seemingly random...
Guest chapter 4 . 9/25/2014
Since you say constructive criticism is okay, you have a lot of capital letters after commas. I'm not sure if they were supposed to be periods or you accidentally hit return and continued writing and auto-correct changed it but its quite obvious in the beginning especially...
Guest chapter 3 . 9/25/2014
Hehe im not sure if you meant to make a Harry Potter and the Sorcerer's Stone reference but the "before you could say 'quidditch'" is practically the exact line that one of the teachers say in that movie X3 (I just watched it ;P )
Herbie The Time Travelling Car chapter 22 . 8/30/2014
what was the song that gabrielle sang to harry in the shop
willowfaust chapter 22 . 8/26/2014
love your easy writing style
Xzeria chapter 12 . 8/21/2014
Hey i'm french and i wanted to point out a mistake to you you don't say "votre professeur de fran├žais nouvelle" you say votre nouveau professeur de fran├žais :)
lovelydrarrylover chapter 22 . 8/15/2014
Very cute
musme chapter 22 . 3/5/2014
I like it
sad sabrin chapter 22 . 2/1/2014
i hope that you continue it some time
sad sabrin chapter 11 . 2/1/2014
lovely again
update please
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