I would LOVE to read more. I laughed my tail off reading this!

Hhahawhaha, this was quite funny! :)

This is what happens when Q gets drunk, isn't it.

That would've been one crazy episode-I love where you take those two initial ideas of LaForge and Q! Mafia boss Spot with his loyal sidekick Data was really funny too.

IDEK. BUT, UH.

I LOVE THIS.

OMG this is amazing! You MUST write more. I will come to your house and steal all your desserts if you do not write more.

I would love to read the rest of this. :) It's quite awesome.

I guess I can't praise you for the concept then, huh?

Oh well, they never did do that episode, so I'm glad to see you stepping up to the plate.

I'd love to see more if you've got it.

And down the rabbit hole they go. You know, this would have made an awesome episode... you should really continue this. Very visual, this chapter. I could picture it in my head as I was reading it, down to the square wheels on the cross town bus. :)

A mad Q... dangerous :)

Another great story from you! I love the odd, dreamlike quality of everyone's actions and interactions, and the half-remembered references to Q's history with the Enterprise. Too bad they never made an episode along these lines, but you're writing it now, so I'm satisfied.

I really have been missing your Q/Picard, but this is the next best thing and wonderful in its own right. I particularly like Data's "No problemo, Doc. C is for Cat," which for some reason really really Works, and Q's muttered "If I could remember how," which is just Fun. :)

I assume, because there's a Chapter 1 written at the top, that there will be more?

Oh, but this is great silliness! Short of them actually making an episode like this (which would have been fun, if they did it right), I look forward to reading more of it. Your narration's hilarious! It all makes perfect sense as long as you don't worry about it, which is a good sign you've got the parody bit down right.

And there are some wonderful references. Like the ten chocolate sundaes. Ha!