Reviews for Pressure
Lilabean443 chapter 1 . 6/24/2013
Oh my sweet baby jesus that was the most precious thing I have ever encountered in my life...

ASDFGHJKL THAT WAS SO CUTE!

I love Carlisle and just seeing him as a father like this just makes me MELT! Adorable!

Lila bean
haleena15 chapter 1 . 8/12/2010
its really cute-haleena-
ranielle1232 chapter 1 . 7/17/2010
hey! no need to says sorry it's your sotry! so you decide what the characters do :)

GREAT story love it up to your nexst one :) i'm beginning to admire you and your stories :)
lexi.in.wonderland16 chapter 1 . 5/9/2010
i don't think ALice is OOC in the beginning, she has been known to throw temper tantrums when her visions aren't working. I love this story!
Alice745458 chapter 1 . 4/5/2010
i love this whole series for alice and carslile, i liked that she was upset. It was more real
myppe chapter 1 . 1/20/2010
loved it!
MorbidEmoBarbie chapter 1 . 1/4/2010
i love Carlisle being a father and telling her not to have an attitude. once again, Jacob is annoying.

do you recall that Edward screamed at Alice for not seeing the vampire in Bella's room. i didn't until i read a fic where Jasper got up in Edward's face about it. sometimes you don't even realize how many tiny moments there are to feed off in those books until you find a little ficlet.
Deion chapter 1 . 9/30/2009
I liked it! Thought you did great with it.
annsteph chapter 1 . 9/29/2009
Excellent one shot. Well written, perfect Alice, perfect Carlisle. You did a great job in capturing their personalities. You did show how well they bonded together as father/daughter. Thanks.
Jalice Whitlock Hale chapter 1 . 9/17/2009
Aw that's so cute! I love it! :)
Frailly chapter 1 . 9/16/2009
Dont be sorry about it, it was great! Nicely done just like the others! Alice is not OOC, it works with this fanfic! You must update soon, i love your style and cannot wait to read more!