|Reviews for Chala|
| Advent of Shadows chapter 1 . 10/19/2009
I want to say that this first chapter was not that good, but it was not bad either. Few first chapters are good though. Get into more of the story, and I would probably love it. While I am not a fan of using OC's in Codex Alera, this story has potential. I hope you continue your work. If you continue, I might put you on alert or favorites, but until then, I will just check in on the story once a week or so.