Reviews for The Oracles of the Heart
Lord Asmodeus chapter 15 . 8/30/2015
Jane is suddenly very weak and emotional. Her experience was traumatic yes, but this is not Jane anything, she's broken. An almost-Jane, whom can never be Jane.
Lord Asmodeus chapter 5 . 8/30/2015
Jane. Such profound wisdom and intelligence. Finally there is a vampire that understands sentient mechanics. How amazing.
Guest chapter 6 . 4/29/2014

Is a big no no lols

Twilight vampires are overpowered to the max :P
natcityjp chapter 16 . 2/26/2014
Great story! I wish Jane had made a different decision... poor Alice.
St.Valentine chapter 1 . 9/14/2013
Good job
snakeyninja chapter 16 . 11/23/2011
What happened to this fic?please continue.I'm begging you please!
Smayz chapter 16 . 6/20/2011
Amazing story, you really should continue. I haven't read the Underworld series so I am oblivious to that, but Alice and Jane should totally happen. You crafted one hell of a story and you can't leave us hanging like this. The situation sounds hopeless for the Day Vamps., but I suppose we won't know until you update.
Not your fan chapter 8 . 12/11/2010
Your story sucks

Not your fan chapter 8 . 12/11/2010
I really hate how you go from Alice and Jane then randomly go to the weird vamps it's annoying as he'll and you need to work on your transistioning to different things like I don't even know if it's Alice having a vision of them or if they are there and if it's Alice having a vision then you should say so or make it in italics
best left unblank chapter 16 . 12/7/2010
i like the story so...please continue
badintel chapter 16 . 11/18/2010

Don't leave us hanging ... I like A/J

pls come back and write more
Skald of Freya chapter 10 . 11/10/2010
Sorry, had to drop this. I liked this a lot, UNTIL Alice and Jane was captured. I have a really hard time picturing the Twi vamps as weaker, if anything it should probably be the other way around. And I have no clue what you are doing with Alice but I don't like it one bit.

Would have been a terrific story if you had focused on the romance and the characters emotions. Jane obviously has a lot of emotional baggage to deal with that would have been a lot more interesting than this ridiculous plot.

You should grammar check better too. They are just barely rare enough that I could keep on reading.
snixxx69 chapter 15 . 10/23/2010
NO! Why you stop writing this story? it is really continue this story.
xAceOfHarts chapter 2 . 7/27/2010
Haha I guess I'm not the only one who thinks Alice shouldn't be with Jasper. :P
xAceOfHarts chapter 1 . 7/27/2010
I agree- Alice should be a lesbian. I don't know about Jane. But I wouldn't mind it haha
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