|Reviews for Harry Potter and the Veil of Death|
| Guest chapter 31 . 2/27
omg i was crying through the whole book!:,) lol now hes lik the boy who lived then died then lived then died then lived lol
| Kampe chapter 31 . 2/11
Awesome! I couldn't stop reading!
| No sence chapter 2 . 1/6
Sorry but this battle scene makes no scence. A battle profen Harry would greet Bella with a Reducto (or something similar) direct in the face. And why not smash the prophesy right away?
Harry acts to much like he does not have the two years extra of combat experience.
| Guest chapter 31 . 12/6/2013
I loved this! At first, I thought, no Harry, don't hide from those who love you. But I got so wrapped up int he story, and I knew everyone would forgive him when they understood. I dreamed once, after my dad died, that he was alive, that he'd gone to Europe for a special cancer treatment,a nd hadn't wanted his daughters to know, in case it didn't work. Of course I was just happy he was alive. int he dream. so I knew everyone would forgive Harry. Thanks for the happy ending.
| TheMuggleBornPrincess chapter 31 . 11/26/2013
OMG THAT WAS SOO EPIC OMG I WANT TO READ MORE! Ahem. Brilliant story. Perfect. I loved it.
| kirallie chapter 18 . 11/26/2013
Harry has died what, twice? He can't still be a horcrux...so why are they still connected? Harry's blood in Riddle?
| Airtran9906 chapter 11 . 11/17/2013
I cried on reading this chapter. It reminded me all too much of my mothers death. Your writing as an author is powerful. It stirs emotions and really brings you into the story. As sad and sorrowful as reading it made me due the memories it resurfaced I enjoy reading it. If you were to ever finish this story and sell it as a book I would buy it in a heartbeat and read it again and again. I truly hope you resume this story.
It's a testament to your writing.
Favorited and followed just in case...
| Guest chapter 31 . 11/13/2013
Uhhhhhhhhhhhg. It was so great until you made Harry act like a 15 year old again. Aside from that, this was a wonderful story and I thank you for writing it!
| Guest chapter 8 . 11/12/2013
Uhhhg, I am developing a love hate relationship with this story. I like the idea, and the basis of it all. It's just that Harry is written as the 15 year old from OotP, not the almost 18 year old hardened by the war and knowledge-d by the last 2 years exploits. Heck, he's acting even younger than that in some cases. While being reunited with James and Lily would have an emotional effect on him, it wouldn't make him act like this or be willing to accept being treated like a child. That's completely uncharacteristic. I really hope that it changes soon because this is a good idea for a story!
| MSgt SilverDollar chapter 4 . 10/24/2013
The statement: Review Please! The faster you review, the faster the post will be! just cost you a reader and the fact this story is complete matters not. I refuse to read stories from authors who hold up chapters to gain reviews!
| caellwin chapter 31 . 10/16/2013
you made Harry out to be colossally retarded when it's bad enough that he becomes largely retarded in the books due to JK's bad writing or stupidity.
| Guest chapter 7 . 10/14/2013
A decent story concept except the dead wouldn't have wands and the dead would be able to harm the dead but not the living
| Arafell chapter 21 . 10/15/2013
They oughta put a label in that charms book. Something like-
Warning: Sticking charms prone to fail at dramatic moments!
| Eholliday chapter 31 . 10/7/2013
I enjoyed reading your story. Thanks
| PreetSalvatore chapter 31 . 10/7/2013
WoW, i'm crying right now