Reviews for Leaving Hogwarts
123claire123 chapter 7 . 9/21/2009
i like this
ILoveGeorgeEads chapter 7 . 9/21/2009
i loved it.i can't wait to see what Harry tells .as for dumbles i hope minerva transfigures him into something useful like a toilet.
ILoveGeorgeEads chapter 6 . 9/21/2009
i loved i can't wait to see dumbles reaction when he finds out that Harry not only knows what he's being doing but he's now emancipated
murdrax chapter 7 . 9/21/2009
hmm very interesting chapter i havent heard anything from sub yet guess i wont get chance to read original sigh!
ROBERT-19588 chapter 6 . 9/21/2009
The fallowing ideas and questions I have, are not ment to tell anyone how to write their stories. I like characters that think, thats why I have the ideas that fallow:

Harry needs to goto Gringotts and have a skills and heritage test run on him, as well check for any magical Blocks and tracking devices on him or his thangs.

- Harry needs to see what skills he has that he does not know about.

- Harry needs to see what other families he is relatd to, IE:

Arthur Pendragon, Godric Griffindor, Merlin, Etc.

- Harry needs to see what blocks (on his magic or himself, any tracking

devices or spells on him.)

- If Harry finds out he only related to the Potters, at least he checked.

Same goes for the Blocks and spells, if he finds none, at least he checked.

Having Harry check at Gringotts would be normal for anyone

Harry needs a list of all the business (both Magical and Non-Magical), properties, money, stocks, bonds, jewels, he owns.

As Harry is heir of at least two of the Hogwarts Founders (or should be), Harry owns Hogwarts, he needs to fire Dumbledore and not alow him to enter Hogarts ever again, as well as NOT allow anyone who has the Dark Mark to ever enter Hogwarts or any one who created the Dark Mark to ever enter Hogwarts!

Harry should also be Lord Slytherin by conquest, as Harry defeated Thomas "Tom" Marvolo Riddle, Jr. a/k/a "Lord Voldemort", by destoring Thomas "Tom" Marvolo Riddle's, Jr. a/k/a "Lord Voldemort's" physical being as a child and again his (First, Second) year(s) at Hogwarts. Harry needs to cast "Thomas Marvolo Riddle, Jr." out of the Slytherin family foever.

Harry should by Lord Griffindor, as Harry pulled Lord Godric Griffindor's sword from the Sorting Hat.

Albus Dumbledore as well as Minerva McGonagall and Hagrid (Minerva McGonagall did not stop Dumbledore from Harry going to the Dudleys, as well as kidnapping Harry, and Hagrid brought Harry to the Dudleys) needs to made to do HARD labor, without using his Magic in the Goblin mines till they DIE, for putting Harry with the Dudleys, as well as, if ilegial blocks and or spells were put on Harry by Dumbledore, as well as the Dudleys to goto prison for what they did to Harry.

EVERYTHANG that Albus Dumbledore, Minerva McGonagall, the Dudleys have need to be given to Harry, for what thay have allowed to happen to Harry.

- Hagrid just needs a good warning about what he did to Harry on Dumbledore's

orders as Hagrid is a smiple trusting person.

- Albus Dumbledore put Harry with the Dudleys, so Albus Dumbledore is

just as responble as the Dudleys for how Harry was treated by the

Dudleys, as Albus Dumbledore was an accessory to how Harry was

treated by the Dudleys.

Fawkes needs to unbond with DumbleDORK and bond to Harry, for what DumbleDORK has done to Harry and others.

In the Harry Potter and mostly in the Fan Fics Dumbledore never gets in trubble for what he allowed Harry to go through at the Dudleys or at Hogwarts.

Snape needs to goto Azkaban for all the thangs he has done to Harry and his family.

- Snape over haeard the prophecy and repoted it to Voldemort,

thus puttig Harry and his fmily in danger.

Harry needs to have both elfen magical wards & Goblin magical wards, as well as the Fidelius Charm with Harry as the seceret keeper on all his properties, and Harry needs a way to move between all his properties that is untracable.

Harry needs to have both elfen magical wards & Goblin magical wards to protect his business.

Now that Harry is emancipated, he needs to become both Ginny's & Hermione's guardian.

I am glad Dobby is helping Harry.
zeropolis79 chapter 7 . 9/21/2009
Good stuff but can't any flames be used to burn Snape and the Dursleys too?
Buffalo1fromSalem chapter 6 . 9/21/2009
You answered my question from the last chapter. Can't wait for more. I think a certain lemon drop loving idiot is about to get nailed big time, and he's just digging himself in deeper.
murdrax chapter 6 . 9/20/2009
hmm very interesting chapters will be very interesting to see albus reaction when harry doesnt arrive at hogwarts lol!
Jessalynvix chapter 6 . 9/20/2009
well let's see he I suspect the girls will come with him and I think he may wind up married to both Ginny and Mione.
Airlady chapter 6 . 9/20/2009
Too bad Sirius died before he could talk to Harry. Good scene at the campsite.
Cateagle chapter 6 . 9/20/2009
It might take some explaining, but if they can't be shown to have been at the park, there's no way the authorities will believe they had anything to do with it. It should be interesting to see what happens to the Dursleys, but they aren't the main point of the story, just a side element.
Master Sword 41 chapter 1 . 9/20/2009
beast. you need to update
Airlady chapter 5 . 9/20/2009
Good to see Dobby on board and have him get Hermione. The letters from women were fun.
Airlady chapter 4 . 9/20/2009
Great cleverness by Ginny which enabled them to get the information from Griphook who wanted them to know anyway. Nice support from Bill, Charlie, Fred and George.
Buffalo1fromSalem chapter 5 . 9/20/2009
Just discovered this story, I like it. One question, was the Potter's secret keeper mentioned in their will? To borrow a quote from a great source on Dumble Dunce, " I pity the fool,"
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