Reviews for Renegade
Warmach1ne32 chapter 25 . 2/8
... huh, I don't feel a thing when I read the death matches. Weird, just meh not much of a feeling.
Warmach1ne32 chapter 24 . 2/7
Ulaks have been analyzed for their usefulness compared to regular knives on Youtube's Skallagrim channel. Interesting watch.
Warmach1ne32 chapter 13 . 2/6
I know what happened in chapter 12 is... I don't know what to describe the scenes. It was morbid and I'm morbidly curious (VSauce in youtube explains why people like Dark themes). While I have less tolerance to graphic scenes than Sasuke and still feel something not right the writing style and this version of Naruto is still incredible. Top no. 5 favorite Naruto fic. Tolerance trained by video games with gore or shooters.
Skykitsune chapter 25 . 12/13/2014
HoohoohooHOO Damn this got violent. Good stuff, good stuff, too bad it's almost over.
Guest chapter 27 . 10/16/2014
This is my favorite barytone story please don't be dead!
PugTheMagician chapter 27 . 10/10/2014
This was a very engaging read. I like how you started the story with violence, quick way to get the readers engaged. I like how you had narutos living arangements from birth decided as a compromise, considering how strong his opposition was. I like how you had the kyuubi not reveal itsekf at the start and its reasoning for doing so simply for the fear factor. I like that even with this naruto being a monster, you have clearly shown the difference between someone like him and real evil like kyuubi. The contract should be interesting to see how that develops. Is he turning naruto into a hanyou or merely making his body more receptive to kyuubi chakra? I like that you had naruto wary of kakashi and the hokage, especially the part about acts being used against him while being claimed 'in the name of the hokage'. I like how you have naruto have moments of actually acting his age every now and then, it reenforces the point that these monsters are still capable of some emotions. I loved your twist on the initial meeting between hinata and naruto, like how you had him interfere more out of being pissed at the bullies 'faking it' than any sense of nobility. I got the impression that where naruto grew up nobility only got you kiled. I found hiashis thoughts on minato's lady killer habits and his realisation of the same happening with his own daughter pretty funny. I like how you had naruto not be an instant survivalist and actually had trouble initially in the woods. I thought it was a nice touch having him hunt for pelts and such. I loved the training sugestion of kyuubis to punch a beehive and kakashis reaction when he found out about it. I find it a little disconcerting that naruto is essentially being molded into a kind of more unhinged version of minato with little of his own personal flare. I like that you have him as a kind of mad genius with his ideas for weapons such as the napalm arrows and the kawarimi kunais. I like that through these things you show that people like him just are hardwired to think differently. I like how the academy went by, especially the look of horror on sasukes face when he changed seats to next to hinata. I also liked the parents day event with kiba. I like how you had kakashi and sarutobi understanding about narutos need to kill and how they alowed him to come on the bandit mission after extensive stealth training. I also liked naruto killing the kid who slit his throat and his friends, especially the girl becoming a pez dispensor. I like that you had naruto and sasuke be social retards together and that you had them analyse all emotions they felt together. The decision that cereal links to agression was pretty funny to me. I like ho you had that mini arc involving hanabis rape and hinatas rage and involvement. I like how you showed that naruto used the mission to prepare them for future death. I like that you had sasuke enjoy mortal combat whilst not being quite the same as naruto with his liking of death itself. I like how the girls reacted, especially with sakura talking with her dad and her growing ups a result. I like that you made the rapists deal in snuff. Making them worse monsters than naruto and making even HIM have second thoughts about using lye on them shows that even he can have a concious. I like that you had naruto earn a heirloom bow for his work and that it seemed perfect for him, especially considering his game of hide amd seek with his clone. I am interested in what these 'other' things it is suposed to be able to do that kakashi knows of since i doubt it has the seals on it for no reason. Sasuke having a favor from the hyuga head seems like it could hold some weight too. I like that you had sakura become a capable medic using her own self study, it shows well that she isn't a burden in this story. Her gaining of a someqhat crude version of tsunades superstrength isn't bad either. I like how the wave arc went, especially when naruto met zabuza and therefore another of his kind. I like that he was so happy to find another of his kind. I like that you had a distinction between revenge and justice with there type of people. I like how you actually went with a way for naruto to save kakashi that WASN'T the canon way, i hardly ever come across that. The same can be said for the assault on gatos mansion. I like how naruto had zabuza promise to try to achieve what naruto has for his kind. I also like his reaction to his realisation that naruto had both his instinct and people who cared about him and he them. I loved how before then he was at the mercy of sakura, especially the threat of crucifiction and his suposed ability to ignore pain to a degree. I also like that being told of narutos jinchuriki status and that the fourth was the sam kind of person as him didn't change the way they saw him, more just added another layer to him. I like how you had team 7 become like a family than friends. I also like how you showed narutos learning kyuubi chakra and sasukes sharingan activating. I thought it was a nice touch pointing out the dangers of kyuubu chakra in its addictive properties. I like how you had the three have a day off and naruto and sasukes cluelessness about what a day off was. I like how you had them think a horror was a comedy, all three are now somewhat bloodthirsty now so it makes sense. I like that naruto seems to be growing closer to hinata to the point of her being a friend like sasuke and sakura. I loved the way you had naruto pass the first part of the exams, it was ingenious and the first time i have ever seen something like that. I liked the initial interaction between gaara and naruto, i was curious how that would go down. Their banter about taking a walk together was great. I am surprised that konohamaru sees naruto as boss after he had him crawl through animal viscera. Back to the exams, i loved the interaction with anko, especially her reaction to him laughing at the participants an saying they are all dead. I like that with kakashi you had her scared after they had made love rather than simply fucklike past times. She seems like the kind to be scared of such things. I am surprised that naruto didn't warn hinata about some of the dangers of the forest considering his surprising care for her well being. I would have expected at least he would warn her about the spiders considering how terrified of them he was and for good reason. I liked the fights you had in the forest, especially the one they were ambushed in and narutos game of cat and mouse with the girl who set up the trap with the bunshin. I like how you had sakura take out her guy given narutos distraction. I liked orochimarus observations on narutos kind and especially how they were safe from his possesion technique. I like that it was showed that because of the kind of person he was sasuke would not leave his side for anything. His use of a mud bunshin to give the curse mark and simultaneosly destroy the team without revealing hi identity showed well just how overwhelmingly powerful he was in comparison. I like how the preliminaries went, especially after naruto killed the iwa chick by ripping her heqrt out and eating it. Beaning her team mate with it was a nice touch. Sakuras kill was downright brutal and as a result awesome. I mean, even sakura bashers have to realise how awesome the fact that she beat a chick to death with her own arm is. I like how the histerics went and how almost everyone quit afte the first day of this mayhem. I like how kibas fight went, both because it showed that as strong as naruto is he is still able to be hurt, and because it showed that if someone is important to his friends he may at least consider not killing them. I like how sakuras fight went,though i am still surprised that it still ended in a draw considering how much more skilled she is than ino in this story. I like how team 7 protected naruto when he made neji faint. Word limit hit,i hope you return i liked this story alot
Bob-Just-Bob chapter 3 . 9/12/2014
Thank you. i really hate it when Naruto gets adopted by the "great and kindhearted" Huyga Clan
Clearmens chapter 27 . 3/3/2014
Kindly check your spelling of "conscience" as "conscious"..
Great story. May be faster update? Lol
tjyellow97 chapter 12 . 2/5/2014
awesome chapter. there are none such fanfics as dark as this. Amazing writing. My spine was shivering the entire time. And lye, very creative.
Dia Konran Uzumaki chapter 27 . 12/6/2013
I really like ur fic it was a awesome read.
SkynardTLB chapter 12 . 11/29/2013
Dam bra!
You don't disappoint Pearce!
SkynardTLB chapter 4 . 11/28/2013
Dude
Know that was worth reading keep it going.
Cepharim chapter 1 . 11/21/2013
The teeth are called canines.
matthouston chapter 27 . 10/16/2013
hey just finished the story up to this chapter and i want to tell you that it is great this is my favorite dark naruto story even better then the true horror of konaha also the whole naruto ripping the iwa girls heart out was epic i cant wait to see what he will do to neji in a chapter or two so until then keep writing because you are great at it
Tosexy chapter 22 . 9/8/2013
it ws well for his a normal actions really cool and dramatic
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