Reviews for Escort Mission
BOBBY12 chapter 1 . 9/10/2014
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Guest chapter 1 . 6/13/2012
That's one disturbing double meaning to that 'never again' but it makes sense. Sick...
meri47 chapter 1 . 12/17/2010
...Creepy...
ebg13 chapter 1 . 2/8/2010
At first, the story just felt like an excuse to rant about how stupid escort missions are. That's most of what Nick was doing, after all. The ending, while predictable and maybe a bit over-explained, was funny.
PNEK MEKS chapter 1 . 9/21/2009
Oh man. You are once again my hero! I love it! It's utterly amazing! Especially the twist at the end. I haven't had a chance to read your new chapter for Clouded Sky, only because it's been so long since I read the story, I'll have to start over.

I haven't gotten far enough into the newest dungeon version to know if there are still escort missions, but most likely there are.

Keep writing! I gave up because I hardly have the time right now... but I love your stuff and was so excited to see the update e-mail in my box.

PNEK MEKS
Phoenixkratos chapter 1 . 9/19/2009
So now all you need to do is write one about rescue missions involving Hail/Sandstorm dungeons and the bloody non-Ice/Rock/Steel/Ground clients that keep dying before you can reach them.

...stupid Azumarill.

I liked this. I was expecting some sort of violent twist given the rating, but I was so distracted by my mental giggle fit over the "There's a zubat!" in the beginning that it almost caught me off guard when it came. Sounds like a perfectly fair theory about why the game's clients are such pansies to me.

I also thought it was interesting when you were describing Nick's memories-the "games" and "real dogs" stuff-because I think most of us tend to assume that the PMD humans come from, say, Ash's universe or something. A "real boy", huh... cool.

I thought I had something constructive to say but on closer inspection I was apparently wrong, so good work!
Cedric Bale chapter 1 . 9/17/2009
Oh MAN, I didn't see that ending coming. An original, if not morbid, take on those ridiculous escort missions.
anonymous chapter 1 . 9/17/2009
I'll never look at the clients the same way again... In the next generation, they're still just as ridiculous, only now you also have 'outlaws' that you 'arrest'.

It's really annoying when you have a client who keeps using a move like mudsport, watersport, or refresh and won't stop. I've even had a client use sandstorm on my team. Too bad we were too strong for them to eat us. ;P

Wasn't it also ridiculous that a ninetails was considered a legendary in the first generation games?
Dragonfree chapter 1 . 9/17/2009
Hee, morbid.

I really enjoyed the progression of this, for lack of a better word; I didn't know where you were going with the idea at the start (my initial guesses were for some reason that it would be something in the direction of Facia's Xanthic Growlithe Contract) all the way up until the frantic Zubat and the strange cautiousness, and then "wait, it's a trap!"

I also thought Nick was quite well done throughout with the little details of his missing human life, which added to the horror element since it makes us very aware that he is a human (who played Pokémon video games, no less) without shoving it in our faces. The little we saw of the rescue team dynamic and generally the first half felt very nicely like the actual game, forming a twisted contrast with the last part.

For some reason I also really liked the portrayal of the rescue badge throbbing.

Fairly late, you have "His eyes flicked sideways at flickers of movement of movement", which you might want to fix.

I'm kind of torn on whether most of the final scene is really necessary; it feels a little infodumpish, and a lot of that information is only what we've either figured out already or could deduce if we bothered to think about it. Which is not to say there aren't interesting bits in it too (particularly the human-turned-Charmander tasting a little "different", and I liked the touch with Poochyena being too much like a Growlithe for Arcanine's taste), but when I was reading it it felt like it was just explaining a bit too much, somehow. That said, I also have a hard time imagining the scene done in such a way as to avoid that while still getting all the interesting information across without feeling awkward, so eh. It's not that it precisely hurts the story.

...Well, I also might just be rationalizing my general squick reaction to the fact that it's a scene about gnawing on the bones of an adorable little former-human Charmander who misses home and just wanted to go home and take a nap (it doesn't help that while reading this, *I* wanted to go home and take a nap). D: You cruel, evil Negrek.