| Reviews for Not a Forbidden Love |
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   Greentulip chapter 6 . 6/15/2010 I REALLY LOVE THE SIBLING LOVE BETWEEN MIKAN AND AKIRA! :D Good luck updating! :D JA~ -GT. |
| Night's Warrior chapter 6 . 6/15/2010 awww that was cute! they are already so in love and they dont know itt! and how old are they? cus where im from last year of middle school means you are either 13 or 14 which is wayy too young to be a full blown doctor or a genius world renowned scientist no matter how smart you are it takes years and years of schooling to be a doctor and a 10 year old shouldnt be in a lab as their brains are still growning and hormones are beginning to start in their bodies so it could be potentially dangerous to them...sorry that just started to bug me! anyways sorry for the super duper long review! i love the story cant wait to see how it continues!:D |
| neverperfect1997 chapter 6 . 6/15/2010 wow your story is really nice. not insulting you or anything, your english is really good for that not being your first language. The description for Mikan and Natsume's relationship is ever changing, which isn't very cliche. However, the mysterious people that you mentioned, the ones with the drug or stuff, I didn't quite understand that part until I reread it a few times. Maybe you could indicate that they were somewhere else or something? Hope you'll reveal them soon! Can't wait for your next chapter, do your best~ |
| natsuk0 chapter 6 . 6/14/2010 i think your story is really well-written. i love the way u write. natsume's jealous. he should find out about his feeling soon, since he's smart D |
| i Moved To BeArOcKpRiNxEsS chapter 6 . 6/14/2010 Tawiwit! :)) Waiting for the next chappies! :D:D:D Waa. I loveeee it when Natsume is jelous. :P |
| AmyLuckyStar chapter 6 . 6/14/2010 rawr! i love your storuu! plz check out my story too it called "mysunshine" |
| yuuki36 chapter 6 . 6/14/2010 waaa.. update! thank you so much! and a really good chapter too! Good Luck with the next! .' |
| LadyChronos chapter 6 . 6/14/2010 I was 'kyaa'ing when I read this.. :) I hope that Natsume will realize that he likes, or probably loves Mikan.. :D Anyway, this is an extremely good chapter! I'm looking forward for the next chapter.. XD |
| i Moved To BeArOcKpRiNxEsS chapter 5 . 5/23/2010 Wth at that drugs thingy, thinking of it .. it just hitted me a nerve . I hope some1 dont create a thing like that.. I hope Mikan will remember her memories then Natsume will know. :). well.. Update soon, 'kay? |
| XxAoiHoshixX chapter 5 . 4/20/2010 update soon ~! im itching for the next .. want to know who all those other people are .. |
| MiNi-RAi chapter 5 . 4/1/2010 Sorry for the late review but anyway, THE STORY WAS GREAT! :) I can't wait for what happens next. Just one clarification... Kazuma is Mikan's twin brother, right? or wrong? |
| Whatever07 chapter 5 . 3/25/2010 Nice, Plot and everything... You just have to correct some grammar errors... I'll be waiting for the next chapter... Love it! 3 Don't you have a beta- reader? |
| Devine Inspiration chapter 5 . 3/16/2010 LOVE THE STORY! i thought akira was her admirer or something! it's a lucky thing he isn't! I really hate that old geezer. gosh.. he's irritating. anw, update soon! All the way! woots! |
| luv.DevonBostick chapter 5 . 2/12/2010 nice! love it :) |
| Acpa XoX chapter 5 . 2/1/2010 This is fantastic! I couldn't concentrate on doing my homework cuz I wanted to finsih reading. You are a very good writer :) |