Reviews for Big Human on Campus
ElPsyCongroo chapter 6 . 10/17
Ranma gets cursed with bad luck doesn't get turned into a girl, I call bullshit
Perseus12 chapter 3 . 9/2
Ozzallos chapter 18 . 8/30
Okay, dont know why its taken me so long to look at this fic. Partially because the title didnt really intrigue me, so count me four years late.

Overall the fic is a well told romp with a well thought out divergence based on ranma's arrival. Grammar and spelling are excellent and even the side bits at the front and back of the chapter are fun. Breaking the 4th wall with d&d references and such only more flavor. Ranma and his spiders are great lols.

Only two things come to mind in terms of improvement. Unlike his roommate, ranma doesnt seem to evolve much. Sure, he kicks ass and takes names, but that tantalizing hint dropped in the nurse's office about why ranma is there is barely capitalized on. Second, his visit back to nerima falls short of satisfying, save perhaps his interaction with nodoka. It feels like a throwaway visit that was written just to get it out of the way. In fact, it made Saotomes lack of evolution (beyond paranoia) painfully apparent.

Anyway, an overall great fic and imminently enjoyable.
Axel Fones chapter 5 . 8/28
This is amazing I love this fic.
Jack Nisshoku chapter 3 . 8/25
OriksGaming chapter 6 . 8/7
Seriously, no reprisal at all? I loathe Yukari. If I were in- no, wait, I'm too lazy to train as hard as Ranma does. If I were in Tsukune's place, I would have punched Yukari in the face. I would ignore what Moka said, because honestly, there were about 2 days where she was sort of nice to Tsukune and hated Ranma. Then Yukari showed up and Moka turned into a literal parasite and a total moron. There's a line where kindness and sheer idiocy meet, and Moka crossed it about two minutes after meeting Yukari.

I've gotten into one (rather pathetic) fist fight in my life and yet I would happily punch someone like Yukari in the face. Someone who planted a f****** bomb in my desk, set an obviously lethal curse on me, and didn't act apologetic until they wanted something huge from me is not someone I can like, much less tolerate being within a mile of my location. That kind of person stops being a little girl to me and starts looking more and more like a dog who's climbed onto the table to eat their owner's food, one who's been rewarded for that action with petting and countless 'good dogs' until they've decided to try to literally bite off the hand of a person close to their own, and one who needs to be completely muzzled.

Yukari is a leech; an ill tempered, rude, inconsiderate leech that doesn't even have close to the looks to make up for her behavior, unlike Moka, who, while not ill tempered, is fairly rude, if unknowingly, and very often inconsiderate, even knowingly. Yet she gets away with it by virtue of being cute. Tsukune wouldn't have remained friends were Moka if she were a guy and it's solely the fact that he's been illogically romantically interested in her from practically the moment they met that lets him ignore the many, many flaws compiled between Inner and Outer.

The point I'm getting at here is that Yukari should have had some punishment- some kind of Jusenkyo monkey curse, because she deserves that and more at this point. I didn't like her at all in canon, where it was a lot more humorous and I like her much less in this fic. She was a villain, and I wanted to see her treated like one, at least for a little bit. Instead, even for Tsukune, who she could kill easily if she ever got it into her warped little brain that he was a threat to Moka, she's seen as nothing more than a slightly annoying pest.

. . . Apologies for the rant. Seeing someone attempt murder, even if they were only intending to do significant bodily harm(OH, THAT'S OBVIOUSLY SO MUCH BETTER) and completely get away with it doesn't sit well with me at all. Even if it's fiction, it still goes against my morals.
CMVreud chapter 8 . 7/16
The wonderful insanity of the Nerima Ward, that is centered around Ranma, really goes all out to find new vict- others to build a new troupe a la "Nerima Wrecking Crew".
CMVreud chapter 2 . 7/13
SeijuroRen chapter 6 . 6/10
Yukari trained by Ranma would be amazing. If she actually did the physical stuff, and also learned about chi it would make her very dangerous. He also has some esoteric knowledge of magic and as a girl she could even get some training in jusenkyo even if she would need to pay them back with something.
oldspiceweasel chapter 13 . 4/18
"I beat up people too!" Kouma protested, "why does everybody seem to find my smoking more offensive than the violence?"

I now want to see whether Snake from your Millenium/Guardian fic would love or hate Kouma. On one hand, casual dispensation of violence is something they both love. On the other hand, Snake hates smokers. HILARITY AND MASS PROPERTY DESTRUCTION MUST ENSUE.
Guest chapter 18 . 4/16
"HA HA" Shouted Black Dragon6, pointing at his readers throught the story's rear window as it left for good.

And we all cried that day when it happened.
It was a great ride though.
Thank you for writing this.
Guest chapter 10 . 4/9
Saffron really is being reeducated
Although he might end up slightly more homicidal toward humans instead of less.
Guest chapter 6 . 4/7
Retractable filament blades on a succubus tail?
Is this a 'the return' by sunshine temple reference?
Guest chapter 5 . 4/7
Yukari gets far too much lee way.
On the other hand many female characters get far too much lee way in abusing the male leads in manga and anime.
Afteral abuse is okay when the abusee is a male and the abuser a female...

Yukari acts really stupid or maybe suicidal.
She is only 11 though and children that small are not entirely rational no matter how smart. (Cough Artemis Cough Fowl Cough)

I like the spiders.
I like the nurse, she makes it more believable that you can be okay after getting killed or horribly disfigured.
She can probably 'ressurect' people if they died within a day of trying.
The Dark Liege keeping her soul shards in her desk though... seems kind of a stupid mistake to make.
Guest chapter 2 . 4/7
I read this so often that I know just about everything that's going to happen.
I still laugh though.
Laugh really loudly.
But I totally forgot that you actually made that rival that tries to kill you at every school a real thing.
Your mind is awesome.
Thank you for sharing.
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