|Reviews for The Monkey and the Shattered Moon|
| SesshomaruFreak chapter 14 . 9/13
Magnificent ending to this! I really enjoyed their transition to friends. (My nasty mind aside lol)
And you know...if Bya got with Yoruichi, clan couldn't say shit. She's full noble, ne? So...yeah! :)
| SesshomaruFreak chapter 13 . 9/13
Awesome rescue, love how they worked together.
Hehe Bya kissed Yoruichi! I know she kissed him earlier, but there was other stuff going on at the time lol
And Ren was letting them go to the hot springs alooone!
May have to read some RenBya after this; got myself all worked up with this lol
| SesshomaruFreak chapter 12 . 9/13
OhmyGod what a cliffy!
I'm glad there's more chapters or I woulda flown right over that one!
You rule the cliffhanger niche, don't you?
| SesshomaruFreak chapter 11 . 9/13
Renji broke through! He's free of the hypnosis!
| SesshomaruFreak chapter 10 . 9/13
Renji's breaking through!
| SesshomaruFreak chapter 9 . 9/13
Omg that's so hard to read!
Just as hard as in Shattered. Renji being brainwashed into hurting Bya omg
| SesshomaruFreak chapter 8 . 9/13
This is very nice, Spunky. I like how their friendship is building.
The only things I've noticed 'off' are Senbonzakura and that there's nothing separating scenes or pic changes (like when we go from Ren in Hueco Mundo to Bya training)
Other than that, it's a fine example of how much talent and potential you already had.
All this in just over a month and it was back in '09? Excellent work :)
I think you've said you cringe when you read your older work, but it's still something to be proud of. Your descriptions are lovely, like how the hollow (Nikira?) said Ren tastes like fire. Weirdly sexy lol
| SesshomaruFreak chapter 2 . 9/13
A broken heart is so very dangerous for the one that carries it.
| SesshomaruFreak chapter 1 . 9/13
Thought I'd come check this one out. :)
I think it's more friendship than yaoi? Is that right?
Anyways, my day turned out to be very disappointing so I'm gonna sit over here, sulking and reading your work.
For an early one, it still seems quite well-written. Like your other stuff, it pulls me in so it's like I'm there, and I can feel the emotions.
Love how Ren won't let Bya beat himself up over his mistakes, and how Bya is actually expressing himself.
Also, the last bit is kinda funny lol.
| Hope chapter 14 . 4/19/2015
Awww this was sweet!
| NaoyukiKuchiki chapter 1 . 3/29/2013
| Apurva21 chapter 14 . 8/31/2012
I agree.. this story needs more reviews! It was a great read!
| KaKashiisWifey chapter 14 . 6/25/2011
this story needs way more reviews...its excellent. i like bya/ren love fics...but i luv their friendship as well..sometimes it's better
| KaKashiisWifey chapter 10 . 6/25/2011
i hope ichigo goes w/ kenny and soi-fon...he'd kick ass lml
| KaKashiisWifey chapter 1 . 6/25/2011
lml renji got a little carried away