Reviews for HSM4
pcfreak30 chapter 19 . 8/21/2016
This story seemed decent, and I got half way through. However I feel the characters are really out of character. The mental/emotional maturity of the characters remind me of elementary/middle school despite their supposed age. Your writing is structured well enough to be read but the plots and characters need work. The biggest issues I see are Gabriella crying like an over emotional child, and Troy going over the top regarding affection and reacting to others insulting/harming Gabriella.

Hope this can hell you improve.

Good luck!
MrsJohnnyDepp Jack Sparrow chapter 4 . 7/29/2013
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Dominosrule chapter 2 . 1/22/2013
Aren't they a little...young?
Ceciliaa93 chapter 4 . 10/29/2011
I can't stand Tiara -.- Such a bitch -.-
Ceciliaa93 chapter 3 . 10/29/2011
hate Tiara so so much! but good chapther
Ceciliaa93 chapter 2 . 10/29/2011
still soo cute.
Ceciliaa93 chapter 1 . 10/29/2011
aww so cute :)
Godschildtweety chapter 18 . 6/17/2011
Great story
khunnie chapter 1 . 7/1/2010
I love your ideas, but you place them into run-ons. As a helpful suggestion try smaller sentences with more detail.
MilitaryBrat10 chapter 6 . 3/1/2010
dude awsome
ilovejoejonas4eva6279314 chapter 18 . 1/26/2010
that was cute and interesting especially with tiara and that lady at the pool.
girlpower8900 chapter 18 . 12/11/2009
that was good. gonna read sequel now. :)
Clembo29 chapter 18 . 10/24/2009
Loved it!
R0CKSTAR14 chapter 18 . 10/7/2009
loved it
LoveLifeHopeHappiness chapter 18 . 10/1/2009
loved totally, it was really cool and just so you know the final chapter was lovely and something i never expected to see about jimmy and tiara.

cya soon

kro
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