| Reviews for HSM4 |
|---|
   pcfreak30 chapter 19 . 8/21/2016 This story seemed decent, and I got half way through. However I feel the characters are really out of character. The mental/emotional maturity of the characters remind me of elementary/middle school despite their supposed age. Your writing is structured well enough to be read but the plots and characters need work. The biggest issues I see are Gabriella crying like an over emotional child, and Troy going over the top regarding affection and reacting to others insulting/harming Gabriella. Hope this can hell you improve. Good luck! |
| MrsJohnnyDepp Jack Sparrow chapter 4 . 7/29/2013 Type your review for this chapter here... |
| Dominosrule chapter 2 . 1/22/2013 Aren't they a little...young? |
| Ceciliaa93 chapter 4 . 10/29/2011 I can't stand Tiara -.- Such a bitch -.- |
| Ceciliaa93 chapter 3 . 10/29/2011 hate Tiara so so much! but good chapther |
| Ceciliaa93 chapter 2 . 10/29/2011 still soo cute. |
| Ceciliaa93 chapter 1 . 10/29/2011 aww so cute :) |
| Godschildtweety chapter 18 . 6/17/2011 Great story |
| khunnie chapter 1 . 7/1/2010 I love your ideas, but you place them into run-ons. As a helpful suggestion try smaller sentences with more detail. |
| MilitaryBrat10 chapter 6 . 3/1/2010 dude awsome |
| ilovejoejonas4eva6279314 chapter 18 . 1/26/2010 that was cute and interesting especially with tiara and that lady at the pool. |
| girlpower8900 chapter 18 . 12/11/2009 that was good. gonna read sequel now. :) |
| Clembo29 chapter 18 . 10/24/2009 Loved it! |
| R0CKSTAR14 chapter 18 . 10/7/2009 loved it |
| LoveLifeHopeHappiness chapter 18 . 10/1/2009 loved totally, it was really cool and just so you know the final chapter was lovely and something i never expected to see about jimmy and tiara. cya soon kro |