Darn it i was hoping edmund would be reviled by running into peter and all of them :( oh well on to the next chapter!

wonderful story.

This is amazing. You can write like no one business. I've gotta read more.

Great story! I know I've said this already, but beautifully written! It's really descriptive, yet doesn't feel like it's been dragged out, or that it ended too soon. :) You're an amazing writer, and I hope to read any future fics you put up. _

So, I would like to apologize for that completely random review I left earlier. I just felt like pointing the cake Edmund mentioned. (I mean, who doesn't like cake? XD)

Anyways. This was a beautifully written chapter, especially Peter's reconciliation with Edmund. I was tearing up and that almost never happens! So, I would like to say, bellisima! (not sure if that's correct Italian... and yes, I know, random language)

CAKE! XD

I have a feeling I have reviewed another of your stories before, but I can't be sure. I'll get back to this one, though.

This. Was. Awesome. Wicked. Amazing. Suspensful. I. Loved. It.

That's all I can say. I could try to go through all the scenes I enjoyed, or the ones that made me tense up, or the places I guessed (correctly or not) what would happen next, but it doesn't matter, and it would take too much time anyway. You did a great job writing this story, and I thank you sooo very much for writing it!

"To the stars who shine upon two peoples made one"

Is that a reference to the fact that Caspian marries the daughter of a star?

Also, would you mind if I use that phrase for a series of drawings I'm doing? I'd like to include Caspian, but I don't recall him getting an actual introduction in the series.

Thanks again for sharing this!

This is such an amazing story.

Brotherly love, frustration and reconciliation.

I only meant to read a couple of chapters for now, and then come back to it later - but I couldn't stop until it was finished ...

Then I went back to this chapter to comment - great to see someone who agrees with me that the Telmarine crown was ugly! It was too big and too flashy - Caspian should have something smaller and less conspicuous for everyday use. Or perhaps not use one at all other than on formal occasions (and even then only the new lightweight one). The traditional crown might not look quite so bad if it's only on display in a museum.

He didn't wear one at all on the Dawn Treader, which was very sensible of him ...

I'm trying to picture the awful crown, but all I'm getting is huge, ugly gold with a bunch of gaudy gems scattered throughout. Is it one of those straight up-and-down affairs with points on the top, or the squatty mushroom-things with cloth bits? Thanks again for writing this!

Okay, now I know that you're skipping lessons! You jumped from 4 to 9. Do you have a list somewhere, or are you just making them up as you go?

Also, poor Ed! He does seem to get the short end so often.

I know I said I wouldn't spam your inbox with reviews, but I'm curious. Did I just miss Lesson 3, or did you skip that one? Thanks!

this story was just awesome~! i love it very very much! have u ever thought of writing a sequel based on this for the voyage of the dawn treader? i'd love to see how the reunion between the two 'brothers' goes.. XD

Wow. Incredible story. I love how you changed things just enough to make it realistic that something different happened, but you kept the major plot points too. Plus, the conversation about the crown was just awesome. I'm glad Peter and Edmund managed to get things straightened out between them. Thanks so much for sharing this!

Your stories are so AWESOME! If you ever write a book, tell so I can get it. Please do a VotDT sequel! Pretty please with a cherry on top? I really want to read a sequel to this!

Ed was awesome in this story, not that he's ever NOT awesome, he's just particularly awesome in this.

-Dyslexic Nerd