Nice job.

I cried at the last bit of this chapter!

Excellent work.

What a read! I couldn't even stop to sleep!
I loved the relationship between Caspian and Edmund, and even wish that there was more of the missing months included!
What a beautiful journey into this world.

Awesome, thanks for sharing!

I enjoyed this story from start to finish!

Thank you so much for such an amazing piece. The plot, writing, and the dialog throughout was phenomenal!
I'm so jealous of your evident prowess! I hope to be able to write like you or, at least, come marginally close (though I doubt that will happen, but I can always dream).

Lovely, lovely work, like many of your other work.

Please, keep up the amazing work!

I really, really like this chapter!

Peter and Caspian are finally getting along! I don't know why, but I really like the scene where they found Edmund collapsed and practically bleeding to death in the tunnel. I just love it when people fuss over Edmund, especially Peter!

Peter probably almost passed out at seeing Edmund unconscious like that. :)

The last line was absolutely lovely!

He had to wash his hands not only literally but figuratively, too. And how he stated that he had stained Edmund's hand by association. I thought it was amazing how you complemented those two together and how the events to it played out so nicely as well.

Oh, well, that explains why Peter has so much distrust for Telmarines! So, Edmund become a spy in there and got caught and they tortured him to the point of death? No wonder. *cries*

Poor Edmund.

I think Caspian is starting to understand Peter more now which means less grief for everybody, especially Edmund.

Love this so much!

Aww, it's I think it's cute that Peter is jealous of Caspian. By all means, I think I would be somewhat jealous to if somebody was calling my little brother, Edmund, by his nickname. :)

If only Edmund has heard what Peter said at night, then he probably wouldn't be so depressed.

I love it so far!

Yay! Caspian finally realized that Edmund is a King!

yay! They've reconciled! Wonderful! I love it!

Aww, I like the symbolism of Edmund and Peter holding hands as they walked through. Cool! I much like your version better, or at least, your ending.

Of course He came, He always comes.

Tee hee. I have to admit, I did like Glozelle. Perfect! I always liked the way that Ed manipulated Miraz into accepting. Well done!

Don't think that, Peter. No one ever deserves forgiveness, and yet He chooses to give it anyways. Never, ever doubt that He loves you, because He is love, and He is eternal. Excellent chapter, but Ed and Pete need to hug and make up already.