Ed's reached his limit, and it's about time everyone knows it. Bad Caspian! Bad, bad, baad Peter! Clot pole. Wake up already!

Oh, Ed. Peter, you, you...Gah! I can't think of something suitable to call him! Blockhead is too kind, and I don't swear on principal, so that leaves just my own imagination. Oh! I can borrow Merlin;s names for Arthur! It certainly applies. Peter you clotpole, wake up and use your eyes. Can't you see you're killing Ed?

And to himself, indeed. Another excellent chapter!

Tee hee. I like! Though, Peter's bound to be having fits when he realizes that Ed's not with them. I sure hope they didn't think he was left behind. Anyway, great story! I love it!

I loved this so much! I was a wonderful read and I thank you for sharing it with me!

I'm impressed with the way you took the details from the movie into account, such as how they had armor for the boys and even the way Edmund and his escort approached the enemy camp. I would not have thought of it at all. Well done.

I love Peter using Edmund's sarcasm and wit to goad Miraz into accepting. :) Who else would be able to? ;)

I LOVE Lucy's way of greeting Ed and his response. It seems so like them. :) Don't worry about Peter seeming out of character. That's how he was during most of the movie anyway ;).

Okay, two things. When describing Edmund being bound you said handing instead of hanging. Simple typo. I make that mistake all the time (it drives my friends turned editors crazy ;) ). Second, you say "Barely recognizable, Peter knew who it was." You might want to change the wording to something like "Though barely recognizable, Peter knew who it was." Just a personal preference though.
Hope that helps and loving your story,
Anne

I'm glad you decided to cover the adventure of the rest of the Pevensies'. :)

I love the names the Telmarines came up with for Peter and Edmund. Prince Darksilver...that actually sounds pretty cool. I'm really enjoying the story so far and can't wait to read more! :)

I wish I could type something more coherent but am currently blown away by this wonderful story. It is going straight on my favourites.

I absolutely adored this story! I've read many Narnia fics in the past couple months, and this one quickly became one of my favorites. Everyone is so in-character, your details were so vivid, the twists you added to the story were wonderful... You have a real talent! I'm definitely looking forward to reading more of your work.

Great job!

-BeyondBirthday949

oh edmund, u so wily

Wow, that was one of - if not the most - beautiful Narnian stories fanfics I have ever read! I read this in under a day it was so compelling!

I love Edmund-centric fics and this was just so incredible! I think you got the characters spot on - especially the boys. The character development of Caspian, Edmund and Peter and the insight into each of their minds during important parts in the canon, I can't even begin to tell you how much I loved it.

But the part that got to me the most was how you showed Edmund and Lucy's faith in Aslan and His absolute mercy and grace and forgiveness and love. As a Christian I just have to say... wow. Just WOW. This was one of the most spiritually correct Narnian fics I've ever seen!

Please say you've continued this and did the Dawn Treader? If not that's but it would really make my day!