I enjoyed this so much more than the movie. I could actually have pictured the movie taking this path. I loved it so much and I am off to search out more of your work. Brilliant work. Absolutely wonderful. I loved it.

It was lovely. The last part of the previous chapter had me crying!
Keep it up!

I absolutely loved this and I really hope you also will write (or have wroten) Dawn treader in this universe-

This is really what I have been seaching for all week: a fic where the people around Edmund slowly come to aknowledge and respect him for his own abilities and virtues instead of for the siblings as a Whole, while at the same time allowing enough Space for the three others grow and showing the shifts in their bond to eachother.

besides great way to introduce Susan's continues dissasociation with Aslan and her siblings;D

P.s forgive spelling mistakes am writting on a mobil that insist on translatin to German... and I am sorry to say that it is succeding in confusing me:(

I really loves your story, but I get the feeling that you don't like Peter very much.

I always cry with this fic!

Very much enjoyed both the premise of this story and the telling of it.

One of the most enjoyable stories I've read in a while. It has been a very long time since I read Prince Caspian, but you did a great job filling out the movie. Characters seemed to keep their original personalities, but were considerably more three-dimensional. Nice writing style; bonus points for sticking to Edmund's and Peter's perspectives rather than bouncing around the entire story. I really liked General Glozelle's change of heart; I can follow his rationale in the movie, but swearing fealty to Caspian is more satisfying, I think, and reinforces the redemption theme. Thank you for sharing.

Amazing, and Peter's being nice:D

Fantastic chapter! I think you did a great job showing the action scenes as well as showing Lucy's letting Edmund go.

Good story liked your version

"practically felt the nobility radiating off him" -my, that's a useful superpower to have! ;)

It's good to see Caspian with some intelligent deductions. And overall, you rework the story well.

I liked Nikabrik's line here, about not needing to kill Caspian themselves! Great line!

Good to see the Horn - which Trufflehunter must have rifled out of Caspian's belongings when he was unconscious, I guess. I wonder why Caspian didn't unwrap it earlier in the journey?

I like your made-up language! :) And so Ed is plotting with Cornelius - terrific!

Lots to enjoy here! Caspian as a warm-hearted, pro-active prince, Edmund's very funny chagrin at being underestimated, the drifting of the Four into legendary (nameless!) figures. :)

Oooh... exciting beginning! That is, cresting the hill and seeing the weathered castle which was not there before, and recognising the banner.