|Reviews for Symptoms of Fatigue|
| Guest chapter 21 . 8/17
Such a great fic! Lovely gem I found I'm glad I read this :)
| daphnechrome chapter 21 . 8/12
I realize that you've not touched this in several years, but I just wanted to ask if you would be willing for me to use the beginning of this story for a story that's been rolling around in my head. In my case, I have the middle and end completed, just not a suitable beginning. I think yours might work quite well for it. If you're against it, just let me know. I'd give credit where due. I wish writer's block hadn't hit you with this fic...it was an awesome read (hence my rereading it in one sitting in the middle of the night).
| Account 946663 deleted please chapter 21 . 7/27
That was good I enjoy reading this Tory great job on it.
| TKcloud9 chapter 21 . 7/20
Read this story for the second time, still loved it as much as last time
| MegCK97 chapter 21 . 7/20
Hey I wanted to tell you that I absolutely adored your work. your writing style is beautiful and every chapter had me grinning by the time I was through.
| Guest chapter 21 . 7/4
Hi just wanted to say that you are amazing and that even if my reading comprehension is not the best (English is not my first language) I love your story style and righting. I just kinda wanted to say thank you for the great story and for helping me pass my English step 4 finals
Lotsa love ️
| Guest chapter 9 . 7/4
You forgot a word but everything else was perfect ️
He didn't look remotely like a captain. He looked like a kid that had gotten the shit beat of him.
The shit beat out of him.
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/3
I'm totally in love with your expectations and theories
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/3
Hi just wanted to say that I love your story so far!
Ps just one thing you have a word in a sentence that I think is supposed to be an other word:
And thinking of the stupid thing, his angle twinged from where the damn thing's tongue had lashed around it and pulled him down.
: I think that angle is supposed to be ankle
| Guest chapter 21 . 6/26
another chapter? This is one of the most amazing fan fiction pieces that I have ever read that has not been from an actual writer. It would is also better than many that have. I would really like to know what happens after this. Truly perfect writing.
| PupButt chapter 17 . 6/22
| Irene34 chapter 21 . 6/6
Are you considering continuing this story? Because it has been a real pleasure reading it...
| sspencer17 chapter 21 . 5/22
Please, come back! I love this story.
| Ne'ith5 chapter 21 . 5/4
Quick, someone make this fic into the actual movie! I feel like I'm watching the best of the original series. More please?
| Yuri Amuyu chapter 21 . 5/1
This has been an amazing story and I can't wait to see what you do next.