|Reviews for The Naked Guy Upstairs|
| montannaleigh chapter 2 . 9/18/2009
oh dear. is it bad that i kinda hope she doesnt? lol im almost hoping he will rub off on her ( pun intended) hahahahahahah. wow. anyways i love this story :) you rock.
| Linds14 chapter 2 . 9/18/2009
-“Yeah, I’m jealous of your cornucopia of cooch cooties,” I snort as I roll my eyes.-
Very nice and creative alliteration! haha
-“Did you talk to him or just run screaming at the sight of an actual human male dick?” Rose asks, laughing and elbowing Alice in the ribs.-
I enjoyed Rose and Alice's use of different "vag" words to describe Edward...vagitarian, vaginator...haha
Edward is definitely cocky...yet somehow suave. haha. He definitely got Bella flustered.
I am definitely liking TNGUS! :)
| flecour chapter 2 . 9/18/2009
Wow I bet she's right though about him not wanting people to expect much from him, with the exception of sex. Interesting, Im sike to see it all play out! )
| Maplestyle chapter 2 . 9/18/2009
I love me an unapologetic piggish Edward that tells it like it is! The conversation with Alice and Rose had me laughing so hard I thought I'd wake my hubby up. Can't wait for the next chapter!
| maggielovesme8997 chapter 2 . 9/18/2009
Only you could come up with a name like Prunella Ironsnatch. That is just too freakin funny! I'm liking this Edward. I don't know why, but I'm getting a Dr. Doug Ross/Rhett Butler vibe from him. I can't wait for the next chapter.
| PlayingwithLove chapter 2 . 9/18/2009
lmao. I love Bella's blog entry, it made me laugh(:
i CANNOT wait for the rest of this story; it's definately going to be interesting :D
| polemic chapter 2 . 9/18/2009
you are like the SnarkMaster. love your work.
| sunfire04 chapter 2 . 9/18/2009
Great chapter. You weren't kidding when you said a different kind of Edward. I loved the banter between the girls. The lesson for the evening, never drink and tweet lol
| fanficreader83 chapter 2 . 9/18/2009
haha, rosalie had the best line calling bella "Prunella Ironsnatch" and edward definitely needs to learn some manners, and I hope bella can help with that (as long as he helps her get rid of a nickname like that)! ;)
| RosaBella75 chapter 2 . 9/18/2009
Nice fairytale that she'll "teach" him some manners. He is who he is, and if she doens't want to be with a pig and have him stay a pig, she shouldn't even date him, but that's RL. I love your fic, even if it does perpetuate the typical female (fucked up) perspective! LOL Granted, we all have our coping mechanisms and covers to protect our tender little underbellies, so maybe the pig IS just the front. I'd still watch out for the pig to show up at stressful times, in which case, once again she needs to decide to stick with a pig under stress who's wonderful the rest of the time, or dump him.
I love your writing and that it gets me thinking! Thanks for sharing it with us!
| jamiebaker68 chapter 2 . 9/18/2009
God keep going, loved it. can't wait to read more. Happy Writing
| Roselover2 chapter 2 . 9/18/2009
Will she play teacher to his naughty student?
dayum he did not take off his boxers he even put on more clothes...I love Rose and Alice very funny convo with those two
| snshyne chapter 2 . 9/18/2009
do you live in the Boston area? I was born at Brigham's.
Love the vaginisms. Funny!
| Songirl chapter 2 . 9/18/2009
Love it. Highly entertaining. I can picture the cobblestones and the smirks already.
| DeirdreJG chapter 2 . 9/18/2009
OMG if I was Bella the peno would have been in his face. What an ass! I love him. This Bella isn't all that insecure that she would head up to his apartment with food unannounced. That's pretty brazen. I like her.
I have read roughly 400 ff twilight stories and this is far from unoriginal. i haven't read this story before, even with manwhoreward. so fuck whoever said that. they are stupid. and not worth your time!