|Reviews for A Day in the Life|
| Bob Bandicoot chapter 1 . 2/20/2013
This was really good! The lemon scene was just great, very erotic and sensual, and I just love Ino's teasing. I haven't actually thought of this pairing before, but in this story it really works, Ino and Temari look really cute together. And of course, the hilarious ending made this great story even better!
| Gee chapter 1 . 9/30/2012
That was really well written!
| samuraikakashi56 chapter 1 . 7/1/2011
Funny ending. When the chocolate syrup first made its appearance, I KNEW it was going to be put to naughty purposes!
On a side note, is Temari's last name really Kaze?
| Emziiee-xxx chapter 1 . 5/30/2010
haha. Poor Gaara. I can actually see those two getting caught like that. I can also see me and my gf getting caught like that. Epic line at the end.
Temari I believe that that is your sports bra shredded in the kitchen? Care to explain?
Had me laughing for ages XD
| skaterbox chapter 1 . 4/28/2010
i loved this story. please write a sequel.
| List of Romantics chapter 1 . 3/28/2010
Sundae? Food stuffs near or in cooter bad idea. LOL! Too many opportunistic bacteria would *love* the added sucrose, fructose, glucose, lactose and galactose. A UTI or Yeast Infection would be the least of your troubles.
Odd review, I know.
I liked Ino. I liked it more that Ino was in charge (despite my indifference to D/S). Temari is often written too butch for her character I feel; a stereotype I dislike. Why must a commanding woman be butch? It's a fallacy to think femme women can't be commanding alphas.
And I don't blame Gaara one bit. I wouldn't want lady spunk on or around where I eat or make meals. Eww! LOL! Bedroom? Sure. Anywhere, just not where I eat.
| ViolentInsect chapter 1 . 1/16/2010
loved it! very hot pairing :)
| TemariFanForever chapter 1 . 12/29/2009
lol, that was fuckin hilarious and sexy.
That was really hot!
The ending kicked ass. I like half saw it coming (No pun intended) but it was still a lmfao moment.
| xrowa-chanx chapter 1 . 12/1/2009
Oh my... utter hotness I love this pairing! Keep up the smexy work -x-
| Wolvenkite chapter 1 . 11/19/2009
I think that a story about temari and ino from the beginning and on would be awesome. whenever you get the time. and i'm really looking forward to the anko/tayuya update. I think that is a great pairing and its a damn shame there isn't more of it out there.
| I Spaz With Pizzazz chapter 1 . 9/19/2009
Haha, that's a great ending. xD To the max. And incredibly well written everywhere as always...very sexy too.
| C.A.M.E.O.1 and Only chapter 1 . 9/18/2009
Yeesh...TEMARI'S the oldest, isn't she? TAKE SOME CHARGE, WOMAN!
| pigtopus chapter 1 . 9/18/2009
OH HOW YOU MAKE MY DAY LOL!
This was damn hot yo! The ending was hilarious! ROFL
I wouldn've laughed more if it weren't for my wandering eye, seeing Gaara ask about her bra before it got to that part ;_;
Doesn't matter, it was awesome! HAHAHA
YOU'RE KILLING MY OTP WITH YOUR WRITING! LOL
I love this a lot though. Feels nice to know more about other pairings in YfC. Scratch that. Feels nice to actually read about pairings aside from InoSaku. LOLOL
Food sex? M, hungry.
Thanks for this! :D
| Arutairu chapter 1 . 9/17/2009
RAWR! I GET FIRST REVIEW PRIVILEGES! BEGONE, YOUR REVIEW BOX VIRGINITY! NYAHAHAHAHA!
*Ahem*.. Anyways *SQUUEAL* It's such a steamy fic... Great(HAWT) couple pairing The Bold writing and the paragraphs in between made my heart skip a beat... *contented sigh* Thank you for writing this! :D
I'll never look at my kitchen bench the same!