|Reviews for Not Backing Down|
| amh2805246 chapter 1 . 1/14
Nice job Jimmy
| Xtreme Gamer chapter 1 . 1/23/2012
Good story, but there were a few issues I noticed.
One, you're using too much punctuation. You're placing commas in places where they're not needed. Over punctuation can be just as bad as under punctuation. Keep that in mind.
Second, I noticed there were times where you shifted from past to present. Try to keep things consistent.
Those were the major issues I saw. Keep working to improve that and you'll become a much better author in the future.
| turle chapter 1 . 1/17/2012
This story is good too. In the second paragraph, last sentence should be" Dragon-type master, Lance more than him."
When Jimmy is thinking about how Vincent acts all mushy around Marina the last sentence should be "And that, gets very annoying." or "And that, just gets me very annoyed."
Cassidy is a blonde, not a brunette.
Again she was upset by his silly gesture.
I was sorta surprised when the pokemon was Raikou.
If only Jimmy had learned to keep his yap shut Marina wouldn't have hit him. I loved the battle scene and the kiss at the end.
| xXkatlagXx chapter 1 . 6/22/2011
XD Aww, I loved how Jimmy was protecting Marina! I loved how Raikou was included with a Master Ball! I say that was lucky. Great story!
| SunnieDoodles chapter 1 . 5/15/2011
| dbzgtfan2004 chapter 1 . 8/20/2010
This is a good story. Please make some more. Jimmy and Marina forever.
| dragonchild25 chapter 1 . 9/30/2009
this has been one of the best stories iv'e ever read great job!