Reviews for The Angel
LikeYouBelieveInMe100 chapter 1 . 11/17/2011
This was pretty good! I like the pairing! But y does alice have to be a cokehead! Lol but this was pretty good!
TrueSkye chapter 1 . 9/5/2011
So. Insanely. Freaking. Hot! Mmmmm, erotic bliss-filled death by Darksper, the well-endowed sex god, YES PLEASE! What a hot way to go, have mercy. That freaking took my breath ;) UGHHH!
Siriusmunchkin chapter 1 . 8/13/2011
Not bad.
vampirelust79 chapter 1 . 5/8/2011
Oh my god... So hot!

Loved it!

Dragonflyfiredoll chapter 1 . 4/16/2011
I want some more, please. It was perfect. The tattoo being wings. I liked it.
twilightgirl80 chapter 1 . 1/20/2011
I loved it! Can you keep going on it?
CharliDenae chapter 1 . 1/17/2011
WOW! What a way to go! *swoon* Very hot!
Tlcatlady chapter 1 . 12/19/2010
Wow! Most impressive. TLC
IsleKeelya chapter 1 . 12/16/2010
Wow that was hot. I'm speechless ._.
laura lou who chapter 1 . 12/15/2010
I loved this! I have yet to read a story where a vampire just takes her like this. Super Hot!
unknown8901 chapter 1 . 12/5/2010
Nice play on expectations... sequel about what happened would be nifty but it's almost better not knowing what happened and letting everyone figure out by themselves. Nicely played.
JXB Addicted chapter 1 . 11/9/2010
That was great! But did he kill her or change her? If he was be so positive why would he want to kill her! TTFN! JXB. ;0)
jacksonmccoy chapter 1 . 11/7/2010
GD! I've never wanted to be Bella so bad! F'ing amazing, bb! :p
anonymous chapter 1 . 10/14/2010
keyecullen chapter 1 . 9/15/2010
That was hot! I am not normally into to Jasper, but I have to say, I am grooving on YOUR Jasper! Loved everything about this one shot!

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