|Reviews for The Blackened Heart|
| omnidragon82 chapter 7 . 2/26/2010
Awesome! Finally some action between the two. Please don't have us wait too long.
| Paladin-kriss chapter 7 . 2/26/2010
| SlickTrix chapter 7 . 2/26/2010
Can has more please? Another great update.
| MizoreShirayukiFan chapter 7 . 2/26/2010
Man, Ria is a big tease. I like it!
| morbid333 chapter 7 . 2/26/2010
Ah Ria... she's a genious of temptation. I'd actually forgotten all about this story, thanks for the update.
| Jimbobob5536 chapter 7 . 2/26/2010
Cool. Very devious. Looking forward to more.
| Gin of the wicked smile chapter 7 . 2/26/2010
great drama, hope you update soon
| OverLordRevan chapter 7 . 2/26/2010
like the story and the intention, but everybody is always tryng to take pocession of him yould think he'ld learn of grow a brain to tell you the truth you'ld think held hit head tell her to shut her lying mouth
| Lord Grond chapter 7 . 2/26/2010
Naruto will make a vampire greater than Lord Akashiya based in this little test of Ria, i think his objetive with this a of give blood to Naruto was to test his power as a Vampire and give him a lot of temptations especially power and sex. Rias plans to control the great power of Naruto are coming well so far, she had separate him from anybodie who could affect her plans like Moka and her friends and now is gaining the trust and lust of Naruto for her, when Ria have his full confidence and devotion shell make her move im waiting to see what will happen next and what is Ria next stage of his plans. Ja Ne.
| Orchamus chapter 7 . 2/26/2010
O, O! If she does to him what Moka did to Tsukune, he would be UNGODLY!
| CH316 chapter 7 . 2/26/2010
Nice. However, the chakra of the Kyuubi would be youki, not youkai. Youkai are demons/spirits. Shouki is miasma.
| MikeJV37 chapter 7 . 2/26/2010
Despite being sadly far too short, it was a GREAT chapter!
| Wonderbee31 chapter 7 . 2/26/2010
Good section, and could sense that unless things go off badly, Ria will have what she wants, sooner rather than later.
| Surarrin chapter 7 . 2/26/2010
Ask and yee shall receive, eh?
Awesome update. There were a few times when it became obvious that either you kinda rushed, or decided that vamp!Naruto has a different style of speaking.
"I also have no problem using the Kyuubi's chakra! It's never been like this before."
This bit here, sounds a bit weird. Something more like.
"I have no trouble using the Kyuubi's chakra! It's never been like this before."
Using 'Also' just feels weird, you know what I mean?
Anyway, as I said, awesome to see that you updated this, I look forward to the next one, be it a few days or a few months.
| Dylan Millwood chapter 7 . 2/26/2010
Calling Ria a B* is WAY TOO nice!
So her scheme, it looks like, is to weaponize Naruto into a creature not even her own father can stop and only Ria can control so that Moka will undoubtedly die by her creations hands. Naruto as a Ghoul could fit perfectly into Ria's plot. Seeing as Ghouls are mindless, killing machine berserkers bent on seeking blood and driven by nothing but a pure, uncontrollable desire to kill and are unable to distinguish friend from foe and the only way to stop a rampaging ghoul is to kill it, it'd leave Ria to be seen as completely innocent. What mades it worse was that Ghouls are S-class monsters the same way Vampires and Werewolves are...added on to the Kyuubi's murderous urges, and Naruto isn't a weapon of mass destruction-he's a weapon of ultimate destruction.
It'd be bitterly ironic if Tasukune and his friends had to team up with the Student Police Committee to square off against a Ghoul-Jinchuriki: The newspaper club joining forces with the Student Police Committee when it was the actions of a kitsuine and an elite that caused Tasukune to be made into a Ghoul himself to SAVE his life, and because of a kitsuine and a elite, the two who's distane for each other are going to face a Ghoul.
Think it over.