Reviews for The Blackened Heart
Never-End66 chapter 1 . 9/18/2009
Oh me, oh my that's a very interesting Idea, specially that Naruto is so easy to manipulate with his CURRENT state of mind but I doubt he well be very trusting at the moment.

I'm really expecting a lot of this fic. Oh did you know I was looking forward to Ria meting with Naruto in "The Tempered Heart"

didn't expect there first meting well be in anther fic.
Dudtheman chapter 1 . 9/18/2009
well this should be interesting. thanks for the read Dudtheman
Fritter chapter 1 . 9/18/2009
I like this idea...
Jimbobob5536 chapter 1 . 9/18/2009
MRBee chapter 1 . 9/18/2009
i love ria
weixuan18 chapter 1 . 9/18/2009
Naruto and Ria, this should be interesting.
Bigreader in The Omniverse chapter 1 . 9/18/2009
you said an alternate to Tempered Heart, will you still continue the other story?
taintedlegacy chapter 1 . 9/18/2009
Nice start so far, keep up the good work!
Bahumat knight chapter 1 . 9/18/2009
nice, loved it, looks like it'll be another great fic. chapter was kinda short though, other than that, it was awesome, looking forward to reading more, hopefully soon!
Ultimate-Zelda-fan chapter 1 . 9/18/2009
Now this is very intriguing.
MistressWinowyll chapter 1 . 9/18/2009
"Oh, how lovely! Blonde, whiskers, and tons of stamina...You have to let me borrow him, my pet...his potential is endless..."

Your Mistress.
Thyrokio chapter 1 . 9/18/2009
I wonder what will happen, nicely done so far.
Grumpywinter chapter 1 . 9/18/2009
This looks promising
Obsy chapter 1 . 9/18/2009
At first I was concerned about an OC, but then I saw that it was Ria and now I'm very interested. Ria has a lot of potential for a story. I look forward to seeing how this story continues.
Slicerness chapter 1 . 9/18/2009
most of your fans already know who ria is so ya really didn't have to make the pairing naruto/oc. most of us would have recognized naruto/ria. im looking forward to where this goes. i always like stories with ria in it. wonderful job on her character btw, now if you'll excuse me 'hentai shinji' just updated so i g2g.
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