Reviews for The Blackened Heart
Draco Oblivion chapter 8 . 8/6/2011
Aw Tsukune doesn't think he's that bad :3 I wonder what he'd say if he found out about the amount of people he's killed XD

LOOOOOOOOOOOOL Mako's got him! Or is he immune?
Draco Oblivion chapter 7 . 8/6/2011
I hope her father's power doesn't cause the same reaction :/

Lol, so the latest lesson is ignore your sense of right and in return she'll have sex with him? I'm pulling my hair out too XD

Lol she actually wants him XD
Draco Oblivion chapter 6 . 8/6/2011
Wow, she's really messing with his head...

Lol, he'll become a mini her XD

Lol and she's definately giving blood and not takin it?
Draco Oblivion chapter 5 . 8/6/2011
Good luck, hope everything goes alright :)
Draco Oblivion chapter 4 . 8/6/2011

Yay, I love his reaction, if things keep going like this he could become the most hated and feared person in the school XD

Lol I love how devious Ria is even if Moka saw through it, it's a good thing Ria portrayed Moka in a bad light earlier :)

Wow, Ria's amazing!
Draco Oblivion chapter 3 . 8/6/2011
LOOOOOL Ria's evil, wanting him to soley depend on her so she can have complete control... XD


Wow, that was so brutal that I think I might start looking out for some of her appearances in other stories XD
Draco Oblivion chapter 2 . 8/6/2011
I'm starting to think Ria is the OC since Akua's the oldest sister...

Lol Tsukune's been turned against Ria and Naruto against Moka XD
Draco Oblivion chapter 1 . 8/6/2011
I feel kind of bad for Ria...

Lol maybe not since she's just messing with Naruto XD
Surarrin chapter 9 . 5/6/2011
Hey lord!

You haven't updated this in aggess!

Hint hint. :D

Tirion Fordring chapter 4 . 5/2/2011
Where did you come up with that quote... It's so true I can't even begin to tell you about my own experiences...

There aren't even ninjas today but deception is the way the world is run. People constantly two face each other and stab their "friends" backs to get what they want, it's honestly kinda pathetic...
alchemists19 chapter 9 . 4/28/2011
great story wish you would write more
DEBob19 chapter 9 . 4/28/2011
Surprisingly a story that I would like to see continued (as well as its counterpart). Hard to take seriously, but fun to read and an interesting idea. Cheers.
Mythlor chapter 9 . 3/13/2011
Awesome spin off! Looking forward to updates
Vilecify chapter 9 . 3/8/2011
Going through a lot of your stories lately and i'm glad i have. Another brilliant fic. :D

It would be nice if you could write a little more for each one before moving on but I guess you have moment of inspiration that need to be released in another fic. Would be nice if you continued this though.
Angles of Death chapter 8 . 2/24/2011
lol kill ria? no way.
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