Reviews for Knowledge
whitealmond chapter 1 . 5/3
It's too bad you don't think much of smut, because you write it so well. In your hands, it's so lovely and intimate, not crass at all (which is what some people like, but I prefer more loving pieces, such as yours ;) ).
cpt bro army chapter 1 . 4/8/2013
yeah your right it is more erotic i have a boner i know your not one for smut
TexasDreamer01 chapter 1 . 12/28/2010
well, good luck on keeping any story with either holly or artemis romance-free.

it's a good thing most smut is plotless or already has a backstory - i don't think anyone has the attention span for it. XD

brittney
Shiso no Kitsune chapter 1 . 8/21/2010
This was...touching to say the least (pun wasn't intended but i'm keeping it anyway). You have done once more what others have tried and failed to do. As was said before me, this is not smut but erotica. Well done.
Muncher chapter 1 . 1/18/2010
Wah story did u get this from? I didnt understand the abreviation... Sorry I luv ur story by the way.
xgoaskalicex chapter 1 . 1/6/2010
I'm kind of new to fanfiction but I have read enough to learn that some people have serious grammar issues. You wrote this beautifully! Somehow you made smut romantic and not to mind-blowingly detailed that you want to barf. I really liked this one-shot and the pairing!
dpdmstla chapter 1 . 12/25/2009
Very well done. It's really hard for people to write smut without making it sound cheap and dirty, but you really did it beautifully. Good job.
UnderABigRock chapter 1 . 12/4/2009
I have to say.. This story made me wish my husband was home from work right now. WOW. It's been a while since I've read "smut", as you labeled it, but seriously, I've rarely read better smut than this. Very well-written, excellent word-choice, interesting, humorous at moments, descriptive of all the right things (awkwardness of taking off a bra, for example), not porn-style ("his massive manhood", or some such thing), and just delightful to read.
Name On The Spine chapter 1 . 9/26/2009
. . . How on EARTH did you do that? You made sex one of the sweetest things I've ever read. I apploud you. You just . . . rock.
ilex-ferox chapter 1 . 9/20/2009
Not - thank heavens - smut, but erotica. The absence of crude anatomical details, and the use of imagery, lifts it beyond the aptly-named 'smutfics' which only leave you sorry for the quality of the writers' sexual experiences - or, more probably, the lack of it. There were the odd moments, especially towards the end, when it almost became formulaic and a bit more of your trade-mark imagery would have developed it, but you usually pulled it back with a telling phrase such as, 'he can't make out whose is whose' or 'and for a moment the world is a vacuum, utterly silent'.

The present tense works so well for this and it's a lovely addition to my favourite chapter. Thanks
Alchemechanist chapter 1 . 9/19/2009
Brilliant. You are such an amazing writer, and I do believe that this is the best smut I have ever read. Ever. And given my unhealthy addiction to this website, I have read a lot of smut. Mostly the stuff I end up reading is trash, but you did something with your words that made this the beautiful thing it really is, not the skanky crap that author's mistake for intimate. I don't know how you do it, but you do. Excellent job.

Matt
Jolly Joyce chapter 1 . 9/18/2009
I love everything you write. Seriously. This one, however, was far from being your best piece of writing.
Tammerly chapter 1 . 9/18/2009
not bad, and yes, it's good that u used stuff frm SIACL, hope the rest of "expanding your writing capabilities" goes very well :) i think personally, you'll do just fine. it may take some getting used to but i'm confident you will.
JKWhite chapter 1 . 9/18/2009
Ohh, that was nice. You've definitely succeeded here.
Kitsune Heart chapter 1 . 9/18/2009
...DAMN YOU, LLI! I SHOULD BE STUDYING, AND NOW MY MIND IS RUINED FOR THE NEXT FEW HOURS!

Still very good. Erotic, without being complete smut, if that makes sense. Much...gentler than what I produce, and not just in activity, but in your wording.

Okay...off to see if I can do work, or if I'm utterly not-screwed.
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