Reviews for Camels and Cloves
cindysark chapter 1 . 9/18/2009
I loved it! Very sweet and hot all at the same time. Good luck with the contest!
FrogQueenLaurel chapter 1 . 9/18/2009
Excellent! I loved it!
dynasty710 chapter 1 . 9/18/2009
This is my favorite in the contest!
DeenieMarie86 chapter 1 . 9/18/2009
Chick! That was a fuckawesome one shot! Great job!
s.meadows chapter 1 . 9/18/2009
*le sigh* Jella!

I love Jasper, and not just because he is from Texas... well, maybe so, but this pairing is perfect!

I loved that you made a 17 year old boy's mission in life to give his girlfriend the Big O!

That first kiss/taste was so hot! (I know I shouldn't admit that). Also, your writing is chock full of wit, and even had a bit of angst, which I am completely addicted to!
Harleygreen chapter 1 . 9/18/2009
Really great story! I love how you spin the rumors!
Lost Betwixt Worlds chapter 1 . 9/18/2009
Good story. You had me guessing for a while there, but I eventually caught on.

Just the right amount of tartness in a ( well my opinion) sweet story ( I'm not talking candy sweet).

Give yourself a pat on the back.
sunkisz chapter 1 . 9/18/2009
Damn girl! You could have had a warning on top to have your A.S.S. pack handy. Now I need a cold shower! *hugs*
FarDareisMai2 chapter 1 . 9/18/2009
Simply wonderful Chick! I love these two crazy (or not) kids. So she likes dirty talk, huh? So my girl. It's always the quiet ones, ya know? Much love girl.
acw1 chapter 1 . 9/18/2009
As always I love your writing and therfore the story was much appreciated. The best part of your writing, to me, is the very well described feelings, happenings, places, all of it. I feel like if I close my eyes I can see and feel it all. Wonderful. Look forward to your next story or one-shot.
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