Reviews for Camels and Cloves
That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 1 . 10/21/2011
Such a sweet story! I really liked reading it. There is a rhythm to your writing style that is compelling, and I find it relaxing.
MissBri84 chapter 1 . 10/10/2011
I really loved this. I loved Get Me to You as well.
RiRi17 chapter 1 . 6/2/2011
I love this one so much. It's amazing. :D

RiRi17
J.DRAST chapter 1 . 5/6/2011
Hello. I loved this tender love-story. I especially liked how towards the end, Jasper cared more about her needs than his own-that's a true "MAN" there. Thanks, Suzan Noerr
MartaS chapter 1 . 5/5/2011
i like it- a lot :) it is short fic but sweet, nice to read and it teach us something too :) thx for it xxx
The blood of the night rose chapter 1 . 4/10/2011
Wow that was awesome. I felt so bad for Jasper because everyone thought of him like that and it was a lie. It might be just a story, but still. Good job, it was amazing.
sibilantspiel chapter 1 . 3/13/2011
This is a fantastic one-shot. I can easily identify with the elements of teenage impressionability and self-discovery. It's masterfully written and a pleasure to read, ma'am.

Thank ya x
sweetmama77 chapter 1 . 3/12/2011
Tender and beautiful!

You wanted to know if I loved it or hated it?

Loved it, because I could visualize it all so clearly.

Loved it, because their little quirks brought your characters to life- Bella's nervous (or aroused) swearing, Jasper's way of protecting himself with his words, and saying what he really means with his eyes.

Loved it, because their slow sweet burn that turns to wildfire reminds me of being seventeen and so much in love and in awe and wonder.

Loved it, because they could be themselves with each other, without the validation of everyone else.

Loved it, because you are one hell of an amazing writer, bb!

Thank you. :)
SFALCON chapter 1 . 2/21/2011
Wow another great story-thanks
theladyingrey42 chapter 1 . 2/12/2011
This was beautiful. Really special. Two unique characters, a catalog of secrets slowly revealed. I love the idea of two people who only show themselves to each other and I love how you let them slowly strip everything away. Jasper's narration was so sensual. I loved his descriptions of her panties and her pink lips. Just gorgeous writing. Really.
SamieJamesBait chapter 1 . 1/30/2011
I loved it. I really, really loved it.
Agrutle chapter 1 . 1/26/2011
Loved this one shot. Thanks for sharing!
Niamh Cullen chapter 1 . 1/23/2011
this was really good. well done!
kavelf chapter 1 . 1/22/2011
This was a sweet little one-shot. I enjoyed having a Jasper Bella story where there is no sign of Edward or Alice.

thanks for the words.

C.

-I've been home sick...so I'm thoroughly enjoying some down time reading through many of your stories. :o) The upside to the flu. LOL
chambook0 chapter 1 . 1/17/2011
nicely done
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