Reviews for Camels and Cloves
wreakinghavocday-n-night chapter 1 . 8/20/2010
that was one of the best jasper bella fics Ive ever read and trust me when i say Ive have read more than my fair share of jasper bella fics so good job
AFTAlonzo chapter 1 . 8/19/2010
I just love the way you write-allusions to quality literature and music, some interesting twists to your stories, and with liberal use of swearing.
Zigster chapter 1 . 8/11/2010
Hey, look who it is... Zigs, reviewing a Jella fic written by Chick.

Holy fuck, grab your loved ones, and save the porn! The world is going to end!

heheheheehe. I did it! I read a jella! And your jella, which is oh so important.

Dude, there's a reason this got a mention, cause it's all kinds of sweet and loving and angst free, and yay! Plus, kudos to the realism. Bella not coming on her first, or thirty first tries? Nice. Poor Jasper though, I felt bad he couldn't do it for her for so long, and christ, poor Bella, being so pent up with no release. Torture. Thank god they had a breakthrough.

*zigs is happy*

You make me want to read/write high school fic again. I loved the beginning with the smoking and the atmosphere. And fuck yes, I love cloves.

Well, loved. They really will make your throat bleed. Ow.


LadyGlencora chapter 1 . 7/11/2010
After much Edward and Bella, a little Jasper and Bella is refreshing. I am intrigued with the prospect of reading more. I especially liked your take on small town and wagging tongues. Resolving the sexual tension with patience and care was a lovely touch, I am not averse to erotica, but I don't care for vulgar smut and you handled it well, very classy and loving. Your descriptive style "showed" me a young couple becoming intimate in a myriad of ways, filling the large void between kissing and making mutant babies. Well done, well done indeed.

I wrote a comment on your review of BD on a day or so ago and mentioned that I never left you a review for "Killing Jessica Stanley" and "Yet They Shine." I will strive to remedy that in future readings.

Thanks for coloring outside the lines.

Anna Sadowski
Merina Green chapter 1 . 7/10/2010
Great story!
Hezpixie chapter 1 . 7/6/2010
Love, you really have a way with words. I wanted to copy and paste some of my favorite lines to show you what I loved so much but I was copying and pasting the whole flipping story and it just got out of control. I love the bad guy and the good girl overshadow, even though that's not really what they are. And the sexual tension was toe-curling. Ah, to be young again. I'm seriously addicted to your writing!
ohlneeme chapter 1 . 7/4/2010
just gonna read all your stuff while waiting for VBS.

this one was rad and delicious. i love cloves. i had forgotten how much. i miss them.

thank you for this o/s... on to the next!
IChimpz chapter 1 . 7/2/2010
"Sofa king good." :D

It really was good, though. Amazing.

It was nice to see someone step away from the Jasper drug-stereotype thing (I'm so guilty of this) and turn it into something...well, logical.

It was just too perfect.

Jasper/Bella is amazzzzzing.

And you write them better. :D
TwiguysObsessed chapter 1 . 6/21/2010
I adore :)
angelndeskyes chapter 1 . 6/20/2010
Well, while I'm going to say I wish there had been more of it, I absolutely loved it. I would have liked to see more of how Bella and Jasper dealt with the sheeple but again that is me. I did love this one shot immensely and I'm not an easy person to win over especially with one shots.
Navygirl14 chapter 1 . 6/20/2010
This was awesome.. I totally loved it...Really well written and the story was great.
wendy1969 chapter 1 . 6/18/2010
i enjoyed reading this story. thankyou
DanaGabrielleEspinosa chapter 1 . 6/16/2010
that was really sweet :) i loved it
sneakygirl08 chapter 1 . 6/9/2010
Sheeple! Classic. I will totally use that in real life.

Reading your words is akin to being the proverbial fly on the wall ... or inside the mind of your characters. Even in a one-shot you draw the reader in and commit her to whatever you've got going on in that sexy romantic head of yours. Loved this!
twilightheaded23 chapter 1 . 5/31/2010
just poking around tonight when i discovered this because i LOOOOVE a good Bellsper pairing :) And this was so great! The whole junkie thing threw me for a loop when revealed he was diabetic, how adorable.

and the BEST part was how you didn't have Bella come right away. Because let's face it, as hot as smut is on here, it is just not that likely for a girl to come each time :) this was real and beautiful and I loved it!
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