|Reviews for First Snow of Winter|
| Clovergirl100 chapter 1 . 4/29/2012
sorry to lazy to sign in , wow tokiya actually attempted suicide ... WOW! is all i can say , i hope fuuko can help him out
| crimsonrosepetals chapter 1 . 1/7/2005
Hm, now this fic didn't really plaster a silly smile of my face...it plastered a sad, watery one...
| Mizumi Saeko chapter 1 . 1/17/2003
is there a 2nd chap? nice neway!
| yanagi-chyan chapter 1 . 10/22/2002
hi, ur fic's nice. very warm and touching, I like it!
keep up the good work!
| ice water chapter 1 . 4/2/2002
i like the plot, its nice
| mia chapter 1 . 1/9/2002
hehehe...hope you write more fics soon!
| URUQuai15 chapter 1 . 1/9/2002
Ehh...? you again? j/k hehehe...
I personally like this one better than the Night Wind... because Mi-chan's is more himself here...
but i still like both actually...
aww... poor mi-chan...here.. let me hug you... hey! i told you not to stare! you better write more of the Night Wind now!
| Dark Phoenix chapter 1 . 1/9/2002
Hmmm... It's not crappy, but you're right in that something's missing... Could it be that you didn't exactly give a sufficient reason as to why Mi-chan is suddenly suicidal? I mean, yes, his life *is* crap, but he's been living with that crap for so long... Even after finding out about his sister's death, he didn't crack... so why did he crack now? This isn't bad, but definitely needs a bit more development, and a bit more of a plot. Gamba!