Reviews for Disturbance
Athena's phoenix chapter 1 . 11/5/2012
This is brilliant! XD
It's very well written, and had me cracking up over and over again. I like how Roy and Riza talked to them; it was sweet. Yup, I officially love this story!
-Athena's phoenix
zunaira ghazal chapter 1 . 9/21/2012
ed n winry are just so precious! :)
jessi chapter 1 . 8/22/2012
Great story!
jaclynkaileigh chapter 1 . 6/19/2012
loved it! i could actually picture this happening!
Lunar Iris chapter 1 . 1/25/2011
I could totally see this happening. It's so funny, and rather touching in places, at the same time. Great story.
Ruby chapter 1 . 8/21/2010
Awesome!
PrincessLazyPants chapter 1 . 6/28/2010
I love it when Ed and Winry fight. It gets so violent, its hilarious.

Loved the entire story; you're a very good writer!
AnimeCookie93 chapter 1 . 6/12/2010
This was a very heart-felt story near the middle, and I really liked the outcome. One of the funniest parts was the end, with Roy having to sign Ed's change of address papers. :) Kudos and cyber cookies to youu!

I look forward to reading more EdxWin from you!

Cookie
Poisoned Scarlet chapter 1 . 2/14/2010
Oh, I loved this one shot! XD

Winry and Ed's meaningless fights were funny before but this is just hilarious XD Poor Mustang lol

Panda.
sydney chapter 1 . 1/12/2010
ahh, i loved this! :D

adorable(:
Bellus Animi chapter 1 . 12/30/2009
I like it.

And I did find it humorous, it's a cute story.
empathapathique chapter 1 . 12/3/2009
Very funny! I loved it!
aya chapter 1 . 11/24/2009
nice one
Miss Sammi Potter chapter 1 . 10/24/2009
haha, that was funny. good work
zim8pi chapter 1 . 10/17/2009
I love this story! I don't know why, but I always imagined Roy and Riza only having one kid... But it's your story and you can do what you want with it. I really do enjoy the fact that Ed and Winry got married! I'm weird like that, I know...
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