Reviews for Disturbance
Mischief Tea chapter 1 . 8/7/2016
Hahahaha I'm amused how Ed went from fighting-with-Winry mode to fighting-for-Winry mode in .006 seconds.

Also... the idea of Roy and Riza beating these two to having kids is both hilarious and wonderful to me! I can hardly imagine it, but... I like your possible world ending! "First Lady Mustang" indeed... ;)
luluhrh chapter 1 . 9/28/2014
excellently done!
Athena's phoenix chapter 1 . 11/5/2012
This is brilliant! XD
It's very well written, and had me cracking up over and over again. I like how Roy and Riza talked to them; it was sweet. Yup, I officially love this story!
-Athena's phoenix
zunaira ghazal chapter 1 . 9/21/2012
ed n winry are just so precious! :)
jessi chapter 1 . 8/22/2012
Great story!
jaclynkaileigh chapter 1 . 6/19/2012
loved it! i could actually picture this happening!
Lunar Iris chapter 1 . 1/25/2011
I could totally see this happening. It's so funny, and rather touching in places, at the same time. Great story.
Ruby chapter 1 . 8/21/2010
PrincessLazyPants chapter 1 . 6/28/2010
I love it when Ed and Winry fight. It gets so violent, its hilarious.

Loved the entire story; you're a very good writer!
cookiethewriter chapter 1 . 6/12/2010
This was a very heart-felt story near the middle, and I really liked the outcome. One of the funniest parts was the end, with Roy having to sign Ed's change of address papers. :) Kudos and cyber cookies to youu!

I look forward to reading more EdxWin from you!

Poisoned Scarlet chapter 1 . 2/14/2010
Oh, I loved this one shot! XD

Winry and Ed's meaningless fights were funny before but this is just hilarious XD Poor Mustang lol

sydney chapter 1 . 1/12/2010
ahh, i loved this! :D

Bellus Animi chapter 1 . 12/30/2009
I like it.

And I did find it humorous, it's a cute story.
empathapathique chapter 1 . 12/3/2009
Very funny! I loved it!
aya chapter 1 . 11/24/2009
nice one
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