|Reviews for The Descent|
| Picas Lei-Fur chapter 7 . 2/15
I really don't like non-con scenes, but the way you delved into the "predator's" mind was truly compelling and had me devouring this work in a day just to see what would happen next.
| Kas3y chapter 7 . 2/4
Ok, excuse my french... But this was F*****ING FANTASTIC :D.
I have read many different fan-fictions from many different Authors and I have to say that u top every single writer I have ever read from.
U have amazing talent with writing, I felt like I was actually reading a published book. The depth of the writing in this story is far greater than any words I can grant u. I loved every bit of this story. I was actually looking forward to it being a deathfic, but even thou it wasn't I still thought it was brilliant.
I am going to be looking at ur other story and hope to god there are others that I read, Cuz I, again, LOVE THIS, I do not think I could ever tire of ur writing.
Even thou this story only had seven chapters, it felt longer because every chapter was long and greatly worded. This story never felt rushed and the ending was amazing.
Over all, my words cannot express how much this story captured my attention, and how happy I am that I just started reading Criminal Mind fanfics as I never would have read this fantastic piece of work :D
I loved ur in depth characterization on the Unsub. He was done amazingly.
If u ever wanted to, I believe u would be an amazing story writer outside of the fan-fiction world. Keep up ur amazing talent and I hope u work many more wonders :D
| JuLeopard chapter 7 . 11/26/2014
Wow so much detail. It was rather wordy and I lost some of the storyear and ended up skimming most of it. Pretty good though
| leahk80 chapter 7 . 11/5/2014
| olliebella chapter 7 . 10/14/2014
brilliant story xx
| Wyndmir chapter 7 . 7/31/2014
Whew. This was a tough one. If the writing hadn't been so good, I would've abandoned it, but your writing is *really* good. Not gonna lie though, I had to skim portions because it was just too unpleasant, and my tolerance for the truly sadistic stuff has diminished over the years. I adore peril and hurt/comfort, but mostly of the milder variety these days. ...Not that you care anything about that, heh. The reality is that the quality of your writing is the best I've seen so far in this fandom, so bravo. Still, part of me wishes I hadn't read this - or that I could un-see all those things happening to poor Reid. *sigh* Oh well.
| KuletXCore chapter 1 . 7/19/2014
this fic reminds me of Avicii.
Because Tim Berg is actually Avicii
| Frakking Toasters chapter 7 . 7/3/2013
That was absolutely amazing. The way you captured the psychological aspects of all the characters, especially Reid and The Predator, absolutely blew my mind. I could not put this down and read it all in one sitting. It was dark and difficult but so utterly real to life and true to the characters. One of my favourite CM fics by far. You totally channelled Spencer. Just WOW. xo
| pipinheart chapter 7 . 6/9/2013
This was a great piece. Loved it all the way through.
| Anonymous chapter 7 . 4/2/2013
I seriously cried when they found Reid. I was so incredibly upset. But I'm glad he lived :)
| Motaku1235 chapter 7 . 3/3/2013
AWESOME! And in a weird way I kind of feel sad for Jones.
| Guest chapter 7 . 7/2/2012
Brilliantly written and wonderfully engaging. You write like a professional.
| manwathiel elensar chapter 7 . 4/12/2012
Just found this story and wow, what a story! That was intense! Love your characterisation of Reid. Your writing style is very unique (I must confess, I did get lost in the sea of words from time to time) and I don't think I've ever seen a story written with so much detail without feeling the need to describe every little action. The way you kept the story moving was really quite intriguing.
This last chapter, where the team found Reid's 'body' was very cleverly written. I had hoped he was still alive but it really didn't seem possible, but I'm so glad he was!
And now I have just discovered you have written a sequel, oh dear, that's another day of my life gone!
Really great work :)
| amarx17 chapter 7 . 4/4/2012
...Christ. All I can say is well-done. There were a few wonky tense changes occasionally and the odd spelling/grammar mistake, but overall this was excellently written. You could really feel Reid in this, and the predator himself as well. The compelling nature of his love for him, the passion in his 'craft' of sorts. I shouldn't call it that but it's true. This is a phenomenal piece, something that I usually wouldn't read because of trigger issues but am insanely glad I read. I loved the length, the characterisation, the surrounding aura of the words...it's just simply excellent. You did amazing things with this, and now I'm off to read the sequel.
(although, is it terrible that I kind of wished that Reid had actually -been- dead? Jesus, I'm fucked up...)
| lolyncut chapter 2 . 4/1/2012
I just started reading this story. Love Reid whump