Reviews for Past Tense
Village-Mystic chapter 1 . 12/27/2009
Hm. Somewhat unresolved. Jack is always crossing his own timeline. Best fix I've read yet (can't remember if it was one of yours or someone else) was that when all of the planets were moved back and forth between the meduesa cascade by Davros and the Daleks there were some wounds in time... some small things that weren't supposed to happen and could be fixed... yada yada.
LyricsArePoetry chapter 1 . 11/1/2009
omgosh. This is soo sad! It's so true what Jack said about him and the Doctor always ending up alone though :(!
Galadriel1010 chapter 1 . 9/20/2009
Oh, heartbreaking. Poor Jack, again

Gx
Orion Lyonesse chapter 1 . 9/19/2009
Okay, interesting beginning. I like the parallel of Jack's whiskey to the Doctor's adrenaline rush. Hm, now where is this going?

Keep writing!