Holy shit this fanfic was so good!? I don't even know what to say! This is everything I have been looking for in a fanfic about Prowl and Bluestreak! I can't believe it's taken me this long to find it!

The way you write is so smooth and professional! It was like reading an actual book!

I absolutely adore the relationship you built between Prowl and Bluestreak! It was so sweet to see them care so much about each other and to see their bind deepen! And that Prowl is trying his best even if he sometimes messes up or doesn't understand Bluestreak's emotional needs! I think you captured Prowl perfectly!

Bluestreak's relationship with Jazz was so sweet too! Jazz would be so good with kids! And you captured him so well too! And his friendship with Prowl was also so cute and I'd love to see it develop into a romance too!

The twins were great to see too! Again you wrote everyone so well! Their friendship with Bluestreak was adorable! Excited to see Hot Rod at the end as well! These poor sparklings have been through so much! And I liked the inclusion of Red Alert too and making him the twins older brother!

I know its been fifteen years but I just wanted you to know how much I adored this fic! It was just perfect! Everything I had been looking for in a fic about these characters! The characterisation, the action, the story, the relationships were all amazing! I would be beyond ecstatic if you ever updated again! But even if you don't I just wanted you too know how amazing you are and how much I loved this fic! Thank you for blessing us with this masterpieces! Xxxxxxx

I know its been over 12 years, but I have seen other stories picked up after that long. So I will maintain hope. You left on us quite a cliffhanger!

I don’t imagine that this’ll ever be continued given that it’s been 12 years… but regardless, this story was absolutely adorable and heart wrenching in all the best ways. I love the characterization of every single one of them. I wish that I could’ve read Prowl and Bluestreak’s dark backstory, but I’m honestly content with all the adorable fluff. Thank you for writing and sharing this wonderful piece!

I'm pretty gutted that there hasn't been an update in a super long time, this is one of the best Transformers fics I've ever found. It's a shame it's most likely abandoned but I'll keep checking just in case of an update because your story is amazing. I'll reread it at least 100 more times before it becomes repetitive.

This is an amazing start! Great work!

NOOOO. You can’t just leave it there! What happens? Does Red Alert go nuts or something (i mean besides the whole paranoia thing)? And what about Prowl and Bluestreak? What the frag happened to them while they were in Praxus? Why does Prowl hate Praxus so much?

Please, Please, PLEASE update! There are so few youngling-Bluestreak fics out there and you were doing SUCH a great job.

You know how everyone was on the edge of their seats at Kup’s story? That’s how we all are now. Please don’t leave us hanging.

...please?

Please update soon! This us an absolutely wonderful gem to find! Even if it's been years, I'll still have hope!

Omg! The last chapter and cliffhanger! This fic is epically awesome! I hope you can continue it.

Awesome epic chapter. ...Uh the con wasn't the just one!

He just need another trauma to speak. Poor Blue. Awesome epic chapter.

He just needed another trauma to start speaking. Awesome epic chapter.

Ble has Prowl and everyone wrapped in his little finger.

It was the most cutest adventure ever!

Everyone want to cuddles Blue

Well their past is heavy. Awesome chapter.